Wow, I am looking forward to reading your work. I usually don't read contemporary romance novels but it's different and appealing. I hope you continue to work on it. Lots of love ❤️ ??
The story is good so far! I like how you vividly narrated the story and the development was nice and steady. I love the plotline and it was an enjoyable read! Keep it going until you reach a million views and you will find it pleasing to the eyes. Characters are showed well with various emotions and I can't help but be attached to them. Kudos and your reader here. Peace ✌️
والله الصراحه مدري ايش اقول كذا بس واصل انت قدها وما اعرف ليه اكتب بالعربيه ولا بالانجليزيه ولكن الحياه كذا ومدري ليه لازم يبغا كلام كثير وانا ما اعرف شي عن ذا وايضا الفتاه رهيبه وحبيتها ??
I hope he wins the war and ends up controlling everything. But I'm worried about that devouring domain demon. What if he ends up becoming a puppet after all and gets controlled by that thing? What about his supposed friends and allies will they still support him? I mean its human nature to fear and hate the unknown ur things you dont understand. I hope he will be alright.
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Review as at chapter 20It's a calming read. The idea of an immortal shopping mall is refreshing and the idea that Lin has let the other cultivators start their own business or just hang around in there is a good take unlike the common indifferent trope store owners usually have in these types of novels.I'd appreciate more interaction among the cultivators , go deeper play around with it and even the different types of businesses they have opened. For that lively wholesome mall feel the characters need to be more interactive and fleshed out. But all in all it's a good novel with potential all the best in the trails ahead and hopefully Lin Feng gets the option to buy cultivation knowledge and not just increase his realm.
