30 chapters review........First, why do people give it a low rating when this novel only had 3 chapters? Why even bother?Ok, let's begin, the mc is transported to an unknown world with the system from his game, though he starts at the lowest level he does have all the items in his inventory from the game. As in the sypnosis he is a hoarder with 10 year of resources inside his inventory.Scrolls (buffs, debuffs ect.), calling cards (Summoning card) and resources ect. In the novel is stated that he can summon a rarity unit (Basically overpowered) but doesn't do so as it requires enourmas amounts of resources and diamonds (Diamonds are the P2W currency most likely) so the mc didn't hesistate to ignore it.The mc just uses low-rarity common units.To get diamonds he needs to do quests that he get randomly depending on the situation.The mc himself is quite smart and cautious, from what I have read, although the mc refuses to use high-end units and resources, when his life is in-danger he won't hesistate to use it. Though for now he spams low level scrolls and items like candy to buff his units.Translation Quality: 5* (Nice)SoU: 5* (trial read)Story development: 4* (There is actually some action in the first 30 chapters! Also, it looks quite promising)Character design: 4* (Smart, cautious and a treasure hoarder mc with some emotion in the side characters.)World background: 3* (I mean, at this point every world background is getting 3 stars as there is nothing told except the east thing where people have black hair and such, also the destination.)Overall score: 4.2Personal rating: 4.4
Eh, I just wanted a leave a review to say that this story is now premium, and that I will try to increase the quality of this story by a thousand percent. You can expect at least 1 chapter a day from me starting January first, maybe 3 - 5 somedays if things are going well, and... lots of heart warming harem scenes, so please forgive me for trying to make a living :D
I GET IT!! I GET IT!! HAHAHAI think I get it...The biggest misunderstanding of all haha!! I won't spoil anymore. I almost drop this book because of it but then, haha. The author doesn't want to explain it so I won't spoil anymore..This is already my second review lol. But the grammar still need improvement though. Hope this won't drop.
this book starts with a suspenseful plot, the timelines differ, but the MMORPG genre is the same as that every novel... waiting for regular update...
love the novel so far. keep up the good work
The novel is actually quite good but the grammar is quite bad even but overall if you don’t mind the grammar you would love the storyline ???
Very short story. Most likely the author started with the idea of a reincarnated with a system storyline but the story fails to take off. At least he did a good job of finishing it.
overpowered annoying female charactersthe first one was still finethe second one, his teacher , I quitdropped out at chapter 66why just why whyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
To talk about his writing, he has a good grasp, but he makes it messy and very confusing to read. The goals are not clear. The mc is kinda boring. So if you looking for anything except these then the story is yours. But if you are looking for a smart mc and a constant development then it's not the story u should read.
I read until around Chapter 114, were I now will completely abandon this story.All the side characters don't have real character or proper developement besides, well the one goal they trade their life for, after practically killing their enemies they remain by our Protagonists side, listening to all his orders and just are there to overpower everyone else on his path.I couldn't read it anymore after that one subordinate, who signed his life away for 14 years of being the Protagonists slave, fused with the FEMALE Angel Soul and complained in losing his manliness by fusing with her and actually refused to take her power, but still got it, even if it's 'slowly', it just pisses me totally off. It's her power he is taking after all, her powers are made for a female by a female, what did he expect?He constantly complained how he was the weakest among the subordinates and wanted to become stronger, but instead of giving him like an typical power training or trade that could make him stronger, he fused with the female Angel, that made no sense to me as he wasn't suitable to any of the Angels in the beginning and I don't like it how the Autor ignores his own reasoning, as he previously mentioned how no the former Owners didn't found any suitable bodies for these Angels, but now they do, which I don't mind, but at least the Autor could have just made any other character to fuse with the female Angel instead of that man.It was a okay read till that scene, I just don't like how it developed and it made me sour towards the story, I'm sorry to all that love this trash, but this is my opinion.
WHY IS THIS NOVEL GO UNNOTICED THO?? I THINK THIS NOVEL IS ACTUALLY THE CUP OF TEA TO MANY PEOPLE!! HEY YOU, YES YOU THE ONE READING THIS! GO READ THIS NOVEL!!
Pls continue writing, i`ve been waiting over a year now, LOVE this Novel!