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Hello comrades its me the author and I hope you can give me a chance . And give Me tips about how to make this book better if you like the idea . please Ill go Fix all grammar mistakes Right now so please give me some tips . So I can make this book better please From : Author To: readers
Vine por tus otras obras y los tags, y me he quedado por la historia. Un comienzo "simple" que engaña, con mucha oscuridad y crueldad que llevan al MC al camino de un isekai? Pues no, resulta que es el camino más "normal" del bien y el mal. De momento enganchadisimo a la historia, aunque nunca soy muy fan de los MC consumidos por el odio/crueldad para lograr sus objetivos (y más si ello conlleva a alejarse de muchas ricas waifus). Esperando con ansias actualizaciones más constantes para no estar siempre a la espera.
what is the Chinese name of this story ?
no consistency of the flow of novelyou can't find what happened to Lin Shiqing in the chapter and who took action to save her and in the next second you find MC is nowhere to be found on the spot and she is not in danger anymore
I have read the novel Frist 20 chapters and it was really interesting and great to read . even better than the description ❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️❤️☺️ It is both funny and amazing novel. Hope the author will continue like that ?
good with lot of potentialwriting quality is one of the best overall a good read.
Its deviated from the original idea. What originally should have been about a fallen immortal running a wine store has instead morphed into a story where the wine store aspect has been sidelined in favour of ‘sect building’. Like what the **** author? I came here to read about what was written in the synopsis not some bullshit xianxia novel where the protagonist builds a sect with the system aspect only being there to give him quick powerups.An example being how the system missions were previously all about making wine and the betterment of the store deviating and becoming some random bullshit like “Explore the Fallen Immortals Cave where there are items useful for your cultivation!”Summary: Used to be a unique novel that stayed true to its synopse only to regress into a typical xianxia novel where the protagonist unwittingly collects a harem and the system is relegated into being an object that serves no other purpose other than to be the source for the protagonists miraculous powerups.
Do continue this novel. There's good potential like Dual Cultivation and its very worth your time to read. The MC is mature and is not overly arrogant like other characters. Definitely expecting a lot from this!
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