a great read. writing could be a little be improved cause I was getting confused that some dialogue weren't mark. And Im always kinda lost whenever the characters especially the chosen ones are introduced. all in all I enjoy reading it. the story really gives you the "what happens next I want to know what happens next?" vibes
A very good novel good to read in boring times
The comedy is good and i hope the new chapters will come flooding in so that i can read them in batches
It has bad grammar and you can't even understand what is going in the story.
You should use Grammerly to help out with the problem and edit everything.
This story is well written. I haven't read something so good for a while. The storyline develops well throughout and the picture created is fascinating. Overall this is a great book.
I am not someone who writes reviews for novels (since I'm really lazy, and I mostly like commenting on chapters), but I certainly have to give it to ya, I did not expect this novel to be such a twister. At first when I read the title, it felt like the typical VRMMO novels out there, but this one is a real twister.
Now truthfully speaking this is my FIRST review, so I can't give the specifics, but all in all I must give this a 5-star just based on the World Background and Story Development, the chapters have some small grammar mistakes here and there, but nothing too much to worry about since some people can fix those in the paragraph comments. Keep up the good work Author!! I will surely reserve at LEAST 1 power stone and 1 fast pass if it's the last thing I do!
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Absolutely brilliant to read . I absolutly love it. It was so brilliant and the caracters so well written. Sat here i wish i hadn't finished it! Really pleasant read took me by surprise . I recommend everybody to read this
Academy story? I'm in. The starting chapters were pretty good and immersive, and I appreciate the author's vast vocab and good English, which helps with the reading experience. So far the mc has just entered the academy in the title and things have been progressing quite naturally. The world building from the start is pretty ok, IMO. Looking forward to reading more. Good luck, author!
this is around the first SCP Web novel that I read that actually Focuses on anything SCP instead of Just make the SCPs be something a little extra in their " cultivation/isekai/ bullshit. So [img=recommend] : ) do you, my friend.
hope this continues
Ok, let's get started, my opinion as a 17-year-old, ******* writer:
1. Was I hooked?
First, let me clarify something, I came into this novel blind, I don't usually read romantic **** stories like this so I won't be comparing it to anything else.
Yes, it did hook me. Why? Because to me, it's a brand new concept, but I am aware that this sort of romance is a common type of novel. "Weak-to-Strong", at least in my eyes, does nothing special, but it has interesting (probably overused) subjects in my eyes.
2. What I liked/disliked:
I liked the simple and easy-to-follow style; it is beneficial because I can tell you struggle with grammar (maybe English isn't your first language; just like for me), and otherwise, it would be hard to read this and understand what exactly is going on. So yeah, as you can imagine, what I disliked is the poor grammar, countless spelling mistakes, and lack of time dedicated to perfecting each line.
3. Would I continue reading?
Bluntly, no. I'm looking for fiction that can help me improve my writing and give me inspiration. This novel appears to be written for the casual readers that want more of this genre, and don't mind the quality.
Overall, I believe your novel has a specific audience and you should work on catering it to that audience, which you seemed to have done perfectly from the parts I read.
I would definitely advise you to read other, advanced, and highly rated works similar to this so that you can perhaps improve your grammar and sometimes get inspiration if you are ever lacking it.
Also, yes, the grammar in this review is off, I'm aware of it. It's ironic that I'm criticizing their grammar, but I believe this is only to help them improve.
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wow, a very interesting storyline. i think this is the first of it's kind that i have read. very detailed in its description. captivating back stories. this invokes emotions in the readers. i hope to see more updates. keep it up