the writing quality and story line development made the novel more interesting
Worthless translator, audacity to call his readers ungrateful brats but actually expect us to pay soul stones for chapters? What happens when us ungrateful brats leave his ass for the dogs? Pitiful, no maturity, actually makes a livelihood off us readers and our donations but can call us brats. Anyways enough of this rant and forget this trash attitude translator.
Completely unoriginal trash, nothing is interesting and it's copy-pasted. "Xia Kingdom" world building garbage, 100% going to have barbarians, foreigns, nationislt BS.
This book started well, but like many of chinese books expressed some(to put it lightly) chinese supremacist ideas. It gave an in depth knowledge into chinese history and also delved into the history of other countries. All in all, it showed the effects of having godlike leadership skills. I'm motivated to invest more in my leadership skills. Ouyang Shuo, here I come.
I'm genuinely surprised by the amount of positive reviews for this novel. The entire story so far has been almost entirely a copy + paste of the popular MMORPG, World of Warcraft. If this isn't blatant copyright infringement, I don't know what is.
In addition, even if the reader has no clue what World of Warcraft is, no less the lore of the game, the way that the story is presented in this novel is horrible. Random names and events are given throughout the novel, and they are in no way actually explained, leaving the reader clueless as to what they are actually reading.
I've read through the reviews here, and one guy even said that the world building was amazing. What? There is literally no world building at all. It's as if the author just took events and character names from World of Warcraft and inserted them randomly into their novel.
All in all, this novel shows a complete lack of imagination from the author.
the story started off very good but at some point the author started to deviate in many points before concluding them. it's interesting to add a plot so that it's not all easy and follow a straight line of development, however adding too many detours can get a little tiring.
I also think that at times it is not necessary to have such a long description of some things at that moment, you can approach them little by little in a natural way and fluid so that it doesn't become a dictionary.
even so, I thank you for the book, I write this review so that in future moments you can have an inspiration or something as you follow the course of the book. I don't want to discourage you, offend you or anything like that, I just wanted to give you constructive criticism and my personal opinion on some points. hope you keep taking this novel forward.
good job, author.
Terribly unrealistic and unbelievable. MC also appears to be pretty retarded.
The story starts with a 20something unemployed frenchie with no car, no income and no money apparently supporting his little sister. Instead of getting a job and providing for himself and his family as any normal person would do he instead spends thousands of dollars he pulls out of his ass to go to university.. doing nothing useful and also not even something that could help in the future.
Then several adults decide to, in broad daylight in front if security cameras commit battery and assault (felony with jailtime) and literally almost kill the MC. Not only does the MC go along with it he also doesnt call the police. Apparently the hundreds of people he walked past while covered in blood also did not call the police of even question what happened or try to help.
That's as far as I got. This belongs in the trash can with the rest of the retarded **** on this site.
i think that this novel have a great potential, if it will be pick up, then we will test it and see, i hope we can test this novel :)
Dear god I love this story it’s ****** and great. Love that the chapters are long but wish there was more of them. ( please don’t make a lot of short ones only thing worse is the chapters that are 1.1 1.2 1.3 and are short as hel ) but this is a great dungeon story/ mmorpg.
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Love this Novel one of the best fantas system novels out there. The female protagonist is believable and the world development one the story gets longer will be amazing I’m sure.
Except for a few things, this is a copy of my vampire system. Huh, the plot is almost the same as well, except the cat part. Tbh if there was some changes in the plot, I wouldn’t mind reading, but it was clearly too much to ask.