the story was good till now until the MC takes responsibility of a child in chapter 290, it seems like the MC is a priest rather than a king, and he is only 15 years old, so what's the need to make him a Dad this early without even a partner at that. I thinking of dropping it now. I really liked the character creation and world. Still it could have been better...
A wonderful way of writing, there's an exciting flow through the words, amusing scenarios rushing through the lines, it's an overall good story, honestly.
I really don't understand the Novel's 1st place.
The novel isn't bad as is, there is a lot of potential in the world building. The characters, while not quite there yet, aren't really bad. The main characters that is. Most side characters pretty much don't have any depth at all.
I don't particularly like the way the school life is described. It's a military school. Even if they want students to experience a rough life, students "disappearing" each year? Yeah, who would care about that...
There's also other things I consider plotholes that annoy the heck out of me. First describing portals as a precious technology that is only in the hands of three kinds of people, but nevermind the fact that the "dangerous" red portal is accessible at a school, how come there are no guards/you can simply enter?
All in all, a good approach but the plot really seems too unlogical to me at times.
I am in love so far and I hope to see more in the future.....................................................................................
reading up to chapter 98. the author doesn't really know what he's doing. He's jumping from one storyline to the next without a clue. You don't really get attached so you don't care. just losing interest in these info dumps of new worlds.
I like to read cultivation stories, especially those that are light hearted with a touch of comedy. This novel have those things and I am very happy to leave my mark on this novel.
May the author continue to do a good job and soar to the skies like a dragon. I look forward in seeing how the MC would become a dragon amongst men.
I will give this novel points for some originality in the system but that is all O can give it. This story as of so far is exceedingly average, the mc is boring and doesn't take any initiative to use his system unless it figuratively slaps him in the face. I am by no means saying this is a bad novel as it isn't, it's just meh in every since of the word.
Finally an actual readable novel in the weekly voting pool. The story is interesting, not cliched. It has a huge amount of potential. I hope this makes it past 40 chapters.
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The plot is really fascinating and the characters are unusual and interesting. The grammar and writing can be improved, but the overall setting, tone and storyline is engaging and impressive. Good job!
I like it that MC is fierce and doesn't sit back and let others dictate his life to him. I also like how creative the writer is in regards to the superhero plot. Travis certainly is an interesting character, who I would love to see level up from weak to strong.
Okay flow of writing and chapters are understandable, only wish there were more than three chapters. Good job Author-san. A good read that I highly recommend to all WN readers.
Finished reading all available chapters and its really keeping me intrigued as long as it keeps updating Ill keep reading best of luck to the author and I recommend other to read it if your in the comments looking whether you should or not.