I haven't read it but chapters 24 and 25 put together is 'A friend in need is a foe indeed' and I thinks that's cool. The rest of this is just for exp so don't read it through.
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Overall a good story. A matter caution, there isn't much action in the early going in this story. Starts to increase a bit somewhere in the 40s. Spends a lot of time talking about his cultivation process. I like it, but it may not be for everyone.
What is this novel's original name in Chinese?
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This is a Hidden Gem, however, not the bad kind that has to be polished.... Some books are called Hidden Gems but the grammar is bad... Some books forget to have unique characters....This book is the opposite and has interesting characters, a good world background, and a mixture of eastern, video game, and even some other obscure genres inside of it. The author didn't take on more than he could chew, though, and seems to let each chapter linger before he writes it...Give it a shot...Why not, right? You're looking at this...
Pretty interesting novel. The world building is well done, but the MC is not able to make me feel empathy.
Nothing got picked last round? Are you people actually paying for the 39->Because if you are you need to stop since their just obviously throwing random books that will never get picked to milk money...
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Serious ReviewIf you guys are wondering what in the world happening with the synopsis.hey its basically this.MC's bro is dead and got transmigrated. and this 'bro' is actually a girl who used male clothes most of the times when she is still alive, basically she is a tomboy.. hence 'bro' in the synopsis, its not a mistake.as for the story, its kinda interesting.MC's goldfinger is actually his 'bro' who transmigrated and keep sending stuff from another world so as to upgrade MC in the modern world.this story is actually very interesting and kinda new, ive read the MTL version and its suprisingly good.the only cons is that this book picture is F*CKIN TRASH. It downgrade the book's value for most poeple.I bet you get baited by the pict and after getting confused by the synopsis you guys just leave, Right?
La historia en Contexto general parece buena pero tiene muchas deficiencias, si el autor Lee esto por favor considere lo para mejorar la historia(opinion personal)*el primer capitulo esta muy Mal escrito y acelerado, y es casi innecesario el desarrollo del personaje que muere al segundo siguiente*No se da una descripcion de los personajes buena en un inicio, aunque el autor Plantea hacerlos acorde al publicó pero es muy demorado seria mejor describirlos desde el inicio como son para imaginarlos*hay muchas cosas sin sentido1. Se lesiono y al Dia siguiente estaba bien?2. Tuvo una transformacion y no se sorprende?3. Ni siquiera empieza a cultivar un poco para tener Fuerza siendo asesino?4.no parece asesino en su personalidad... Aunque no es necesario personalidad generica pero normalmente se culpe bien el papel teniendo en cuenta lo que hacenBueno eso es todo como datos que vi que podian arreglar ahora que apenas empieza la historia, pero espero ver Mas contenido