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My main problem with this story is the lack of descriptions. I have seen no mentions kn the features of the characters, other then they are pretty or have a good body. That is not descriptive enough. Instead of saying talk about their hair color, height, etc. I do like the idea of the story so far and its interesting. Great job so far, keep up the great work!
Its a good novel that has a mix of mechs with cultivation. MC doesn't mindlessly stomp around going to seek fights as he manage to settle a situation without violence on his behalf. Looking forward to more. Villians on the other hand seem one dimensional so far though
wow this is great book... i loved it ... the characters are amazing... the synopsis got me hooked .. keep up the good work .. an absolutely amazing read.