Damien first thought that maybe he had angered this black haired little beauty but now he was not so sure...
Now, this—I'm not going to get used to this.
I appreciate the author's effort in writing using her second language and her honesty and humility. I am one person who is also very critical on grammar and proper word use, though admittedly I, too, am not perfect. But if someone will admit his/her imperfection, who am I to judge? I know it is also very costly to hire an editor and/or proofreader but if we give our generous support to new and inexperienced authors, instead of tactlessly criticising them - you will never know that things might change for the better, if not, the best. I do hope I can be of help in any way for you in your future endeavors. Love what you do and these will surely give you love in return. AJA!
"For you my son, it will always be the harbinger of death. "
He lept without a second thought!
"Dad?!"
He was born as the oldest son from the Yorkon family, officially. Jin was born in the middle of the Blue Moon Eclipse in the year of 6001 in the Solar Calendar, on the Ninth day of the Ninth Month, right at 9 O'clock in at night. Jin was born so quietly that his mother, Sandra Yorkon, had thought that she had lost him - had it not been the fact that Jin only cries out when he wanted to eat.
[Genjutsu]
The pain stopped, and Shinta looked at this palm and noticed a black mark in the shape of a crows head. Crow spoke " now you are mine both body and soul, now for the next 30 years you shall remain here in my realm well I train you In the power of both the sword and the pen." she said passively as to what she said was no big deal at all.
an amazing story with very unique characters
The mystery the romance, the devil. Clearly the perfect story plot.
Nice I love how your book shows a different perspective