"Do these territories include different dimensions such as the one Draaklar the dimension devouring dragon consumed?" He asked.
He didn't waste a moment to use his hands to massage her until she had gone hard. "I can't believe I was able to stay away from you for this long. You taste delightful." He complimented with full satisfaction.
"Whoosh."
The summary is a hoax. If their relationship somehow succeeds then I can only say that this is definitely STOCKHOLM SYNDROME. The female lead is shameless, idiotic yet pretends to be intelligent.
You have slain player Vergast!
I take out the empty water bottle from my backpack and fill it with water before it getting polluted with Silvie's liquids. After filling the water bottle I also take some water with my pot and boil the water after making a fireplace using nearby dry woods.
The story is a beautiful background, and this kind of tastes also coincides, its main character has a combination of imaginative and happy and powerful, in the whole novel.
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good and engaging interesting characters
The story was really enjoyable and i liked how good the pacing was. In my opinion it was neither to fast nor too slow.I like the interactions between the characters and how well written they are.I read another Novel from the Author and i have to say i am impressed and enjoy them both.Please keep up the good work Author.
the story is very trilling to me, it's become one of my favorite. Thank you author for the hard work
I'm going to start directly: I read all your chapters already out at once because I really appreciated your idea. You have a really good writing style that improves throughout your writing. I have no negative criticism to make of you apart from that your characters are not described enough... But... I wonder if you are not doing it on purpose... Because, we notice in your last chapter that your character is very think about it so I'm almost sure that you're deliberately not describing certain characters too much to do it later (that's why I'm giving you 5 stars, hoping I'm not wrong). Anyway, Bravo, I'm happy to support a small novel creator, I hope he becomes popular!