Okay so let me just say this scene with the ring is absolutely devastating and I need to process it. The whole chapter is basically one long plot twist after another and I am HERE for it. We start with He Zheng discovering Wei Zhenye's identity - that reveal where He Zheng realizes the person he's been talking to online is the same person from his past. Classic setup, right? But then the author immediately pivots to something way more interesting: the confrontation that follows. What I love about the plot structure here is how the author uses the ring as both a reveal AND a turning point. When Wei Zhenye leaves the ring behind, it's not just a romantic gesture - it's a plot device that changes everything. He Zheng finds it, opens it, reads the Spanish inscription 'Te extraño tanto' and suddenly we understand the depth of eight years of waiting. That's three plot revelations in one moment: the ring exists, it's been kept for years, and it has a message. Then the WeChat Moments scroll is basically a flashback dump that recontextualizes their entire relationship history. Every post, every screenshot, every diary entry about their calls - it's all there. The plot here is doing double duty: advancing the story while also giving us backstory we didn't know we needed. And then the drinking scene! He Zheng goes to meet Li Ru, texts Wei Zhenye 'Where are you?' and Wei Zhenye literally appears behind him. That's not just dramatic - it's a plot choice that shows Wei Zhenye has been following him, watching him, caring enough to show up uninvited. The plot is saying: this person never stopped. The chapter ends on such a perfect cliffhanger with Wei Zhenye asking 'Because you don't like me enough?' after He Zheng agrees to try dating. The stakes just skyrocketed and I need the next chapter immediately.
Okay I need to just sit with the imagery in this chapter for a moment because the author is DOING THINGS. Let's start with the recycling station scene. The description of that place is visceral—'a mix of moldy rot and fishy sea stench,' broken chairs, rusted metal, blackened cotton scraps. It's genuinely disgusting, and Su Ci's reaction is what makes it brilliant: she walks in 'like she was strolling through a department store,' sandalwood fan in hand, 'the faint fragrance around her pushed the stench back by several feet.' The contrast between her elegance and that grimy environment immediately tells us she doesn't belong here—and that's the whole point. She's an outsider with hidden resources. But the REAL scene—the one I've read five times—is the furniture reveal. Su Ci makes the three kids face the wall, and then we get these sounds: 'Strange friction sounds. Even a faint hum, like air being sliced.' The author deliberately withholds the visual so we experience it through the kids' ears first. Then the transformation happens, and the sensory description is immaculate: 'The beige wallpaper hid all the grime and cracks, glowing warmly under the light. The dark leather sofa lounged lazily against the wall. The vase cast mottled shadows on the table. The suffocating moldy smell was gone. Replaced by the rich scent of leather and faint dried flowers.' And that final image—'the black night outside, filtered through the white curtain, looked poetic'—is the kind of line that makes you stop and just appreciate the writing. It's not just 'the room looked nice.' It's a complete atmospheric shift from a damp, musty workers' dorm to something that looks like it belongs in a different world entirely. The author also nails the era-specific details without info-dumping: newspaper-covered walls, Liberation shoes, Hero fountain pens, White Rabbit candy as 'the most valuable currency of the era.' Every detail grounds us in a specific time and place while serving the story.
Okay so this whole amnesia thing is actually really well-constructed. Wen Lan doesn't just randomly remember things—she PIECES them together. That scene where she's scrolling through her old phone and notices there are ZERO portraits, only architecture photos? That's such a subtle detail that later connects to her theory about becoming a celebrity to find her real parents. The author is playing 4D chess here. And the reveal about her real parents—Wen Qian and He Jiu—is handled perfectly. She doesn't just suddenly remember everything. She reconstructs: the child switch, the confusion, the recovery, the second breakdown four years ago. It's logical and earned. The line 'For the first time, Wen Lan felt she had finally touched the edge of the truth' gave me actual chills. She's not at the center of the mystery yet, but she's circling it. But the ENDING. The simultaneous 'I'm willing' and 'No.' from Wen Lan and Lu Zhixing? Chef's kiss. Two people, one moment, completely opposite answers. What does it mean? Is he saying no to her joining the company? To something else? I need the next chapter NOW.
Interesting and amazing highly recommend am in love with this book already
The story is an interesting read. At first I thought there would be action, but in the end I got a cool story about MC’s mom in the lead role. Katerina is the best character in the work. I read only for her sake. It’s well written, although it’s clear that it’s not written by a native speaker
Ok, after reading a whooping five chapters in just a few minutes, I must say the book is really good. The horror and thriller in it was the best part of the story, please give me chapter six
Highly recommended. Very Interesting story.
The story has a unique charm that draws you in, even if fantasy isn't your favorite genre. The world-building and characters feel fresh and engaging, making it a delightful read so far.
Story was okay for the first 35 chapters or so and then the author makes a decision that wipes out 30 chapters of development. Stuff happens but he doesn’t reach the goal he had at the start and ends up with the same result he could have gotten from the beginning except he still has to go through more tests to succeed. Also the MC has no real power. His class gives him his harem members stats and skill with a time constraint which is one of the most annoying power tropes out there. Basically the MC uses his ability until his body gives out, his harem member uses their ability until their power gives out, and then the MC uses his body as a human meat shield for the rest of the fight. So we have an MC that is bullied by everyone (except his harem members) and the an author who seems to take great joy in torturing their MC. All in all I’d recommend you stay away from the story unless you are a fan of MCs who get the shit kicked out of them and then barely scrape by. TLDR: The MC has no real power of his own and his borrowed power runs out quick. He barely scrapes by to win(repeatedly) and then fails his big goal at chapter 36(wasting any development). Also the author seems to be the type that likes to torture their MC.
老实说，这很棒，是网络小说应用程序中较好的小说之一。故事写得很好，也很有趣，就像我一直想雕刻的那样。祝这本小说好运，我希望它能成为畅销书。
How is this so highly rated? It's a complete rip off of Legend of the Supreme Soldier, literally plot point by plot point. Actually, I don't know which one came out first, so I guess that once could be a complete rip off of this one. Both are throughly mediocre either way.
Amazing story ?, the more you read the more you want to continue , please am at upcoming writer please I will really appreciate if you support my book. Title: The Runaway Moon ?