Very interesting concept! I’m impressed! The chapters are a reasonable length and grammar/writing is fair. I really enjoy the idea of Supplying a battle zone. it reminds me of Gourmet Food Supplier of Another World, but with a more sci-fi feel to it.Very nice!
I really enjoy how the progress of this book is going and really appreciate the the story alongside with the spicy scenes
Another Good Novel from our jesting Author.It's not another isekai novel you can find anywhere. It's a cliche starting novel written in a very new way with the author's funny imagination. Good writing, straight to development without almost no grammar mistakes.Although I know a lot of readers bored with the isekai novels, give it a try. I am sure You will not be disappointed.What does that Itsuki say? ~~nya
I don't like or dislike your story. Although I was disappointed that the story wasn't something special and was filled with cliches, I haven't anything overwhelmingly negative to say about the story.The MC is bland (so he's not overly annoying or great he's just there) the side characters are side characters.The world building is fine i guess.The reason why this story is a 2.5 (slightly below average) rather then a 3 (average) for me is the plot progression. Like I said the story is really cliche , and for many stories cliches are not always bad, but in the case of this specific story it's in your face bad. Things that should've been lengthened in small proportions for basic readers enjoyment like the 'romance' (if I can even call it that) happens way to quickly and way to forcefully. Also, yes I know the real world is filled with people who do things like *** quickly but this is a fantasy and not the real world. Overall before I go on a long tangent and bore the c-rap ( only way I can spell that without getting censored) i'd like instead to rap this review up.The story is not bad but it offers no memorial moments and I probably won't remember any of the characters names in t -minus 10 minutes. Yep already forgotten it.
an intetesting story indeed, just finished reading thr chapters and i must say they are all well described including the characters for me this story deserve a 5 stars will add this too on my collection to be updated!?
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Amazingly awesome never read books like this before update is very good. Amazing super super amazing need to get things hyped now bol for your next chap.
Nakama world is pretty cool, Colin essentially blows up the word and is betrayed by his sister. Nice. But what I found the best was Adventura was quite Kingdom Buildy and travels through history I also like how the NPCs in Adventura responds.... slightly confused about Shiro as a human and Colin now wolfcat, but hey! you can never have to many wolfcats!
A good story, good writing and seemingly good plot (at least so far)If anyone likes reading about isekai with mc's that have potential, but not a huge cheat this is for you
I. simply. like. charm. based. powers. because. they. are. always. looked. down. upon.this is stupid considering that almost all so called "extremely calm and reasonable" protagonist will bend over backwards just for a random pretty girl.if it has the power to compel an army of protagonists to surrender what more do you need?
Really hope nnone buy privilege. Author is complete liar. All promises are broken the day they are given. Story is almost repeat of the first book which was dropped because author didnt get enough money after all shit he gave his readers. Too much cliche and cliffs.