Honestly, although better than most of the garbage junk on this site it’s just a TBATE clone. It has the potential to actually be more and interesting but the author forces so many plots just to keep the same storyline as in TBATE. I mean here we have a reborn 18 year old that has never known familial love but runs off first thing to go train with dragons for years leaving his parents to think him dead. He comes back only to leave them after what 2 weeks to become an adventurer at like 7. Yeah okay makes sense for parents to finally get their son back and allow him a 7 year old to go off on adventures. Another thing is the “bind” honestly a terrible name that’s just awkward when magic could’ve worked because as said he came from Eath where magic and mana or essence or elemental anything could’ve worked but no we have bind and binders. Just doesn’t work other than wanting to be different from the otherwise same story TBATE. Early on we get informed that the average age of someone awakening is around 12 and our main character awoke at 3 you’d think this would give him an advantage but no not really everyone and their mother seems to be a 8 year old fully awakened genius that is close to being on par with our 18 year old combat veteran. Another thing I have to point out is the switching between pov’s because it doesn’t add anything to the story other than tooting the MC’s horn and saying how different he is from the other boys and how great he is. There is little to no development for the side characters other than being there to support the mc. But like I said it’s better than most novels on the site and the only reason I’m being harsh is because the author has potential it just makes me mad to see a possibly good novel turn bad because it’s trying to follow another story.
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Interesting works, I like the details of the characters and setting also the character in your thumbnail looks striking to Joker, I'm new to this site by any chance it's not a fanfic? Also ghost hunters is a fun idea, not to mention they also have guilds, also I'm positive this is a war between the ghost/demons and the hunters, the part where the large demon came out the portal was funny to me because of the reactions of the 5 leaders, the story is also pretty apocalyptic.
Love the story, nice world building and great character development. Have a little issue with the grammar but not too much, it didn't really affect my reading experience. I'm looking forward how the story would progress, there is a lot of tease here and there but it didn't reveal much. This story is big I'm guessing it would reach +1000 plus chapter I just hope the writer continue. Nice work
Very under rated story but actually very fun adventure and some of the chapers are so funny that i was laughing. The MC is a good-for-nothing cultivator who is trying to romance his master. He is actually a god immortal character that is reincarnated into a good-for-nothing cultivator because his cultivation potential is suppressed. Story is actually very deep and epic.
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You mother****er author.................. Why not write more for free........................ I want to kill you!!!............................
Few years ago, I was fascinated with a story written on wattpad same like this one. And finally I'm happy to find and able to read your novel. It is true indeed, i agree with other comments, i also found myself can't wait for the next update. I would like to say, thank you to the author for having such creative mind by creating and writing a fascinating, spectacular, one of a kind story.Though, it's grammar is not perfectly written or should i say it's translation, but still doesn't affect how good the story is.To readers out there:Once you start reading even though you find some errors with the grammars or english terms, just take it low, and try to understand it more, and not be affected with it. Because it is really good. Though a lot of characters are there, you might find it confusing at some point, but i guarantee you will not be wasting your time reading this.As long as.......You love adventure, you're not conservative and open minded...You would like to imagine and patiently understand about the "spiritual power" thing.
terrible. the sect and the juniors are basically just a footnote
It is a well written story.More than 80% of the cultivation novels the I have read, the MC is either retard or an idiot. Provoking powerful people left and right for no reason, and when they lose " I want revenge ?? and yada2, this and that without making any sense" . And have suddenly the ability to defeat people way more powerful than then, and can jump cultivation realms without side effects.I hope this doesn't becomes one of them and please don't dropped the story.
i like his personality, but he so show off like he just gained some power and he will cause trouble anywhere like he doesn't consider things that will cause him trouble. sorry for my grammar not my main language
This book, all in all seems stupidly similar to another novel by the name "Monster Pet Evolution". The initial start is the same, mc can't tame monster then poof can tame monsters, mc tries to learn how to cultivate monsters then does that and gets the money necessary to cultivate his own. This book on the other hand tries to make it easier to keep writing by simplifying the process required to 'evolve' a beast, therefore reducing events required to gain materials, while also trying make him seem more powerful, somehow?Reason for 'rating':The flow of the text is sometimes incomprehensible, or just doesn't work.Story is just a clear cut copy.Character design is shoddy at best, but then also somewhat of a copy.Don't care about updating since I won't read past the first 20 chaps.World background has a bit more content that is it's own, but most of it is still a copy.If this book isn't a copy or hasn't taken inspiration from MPE, then the author is just inept at researching, writing, and/or creativity. Contrarily, I highly would recommend anyone that sees this review to check out Monster Pet Evolution. It's finished and has a decently written story all around. The ending will throw you for a loop for a bit but it isn't the worst.TL;DR This books seems like a rip of another decent monster taming novel of the name Monster Pet Evolution, but it doesn't have nearly the same quality, imo.