Ideas for Writers

90 % of words are over written, an 50 % are un needed and over descriptive , beyond what could be acceptable or fine.Premise was fine then ,2 bit piece of junk writer happened, maybe he cant fill more pages ortherwise. With a work that cant be resumed at 10 pages , like this.And let no begin with plot holes. Puuf

i will try this i dont know how he  is nuclear it would change his dna and not good dna he would have cancer and it would eat and replace his cells

Literally worse English I ever read. Use your brain cells and write understandibly can't understand anything written.,...???.?..............

the mc is Lazy ........................................   ............   ..................... ........ ............................   .

its a really interesting story. which brings forth almost all cliche chinese novel protagonists . you can read the mtl from other sites it has 700+ chap.

Keep up the good work .........................................................................................................................................