The story, and its content are solid. It's the formatting that makes it a tough read to get through. Especially in the beginning of the story, you will find that scenes change without a prior indicator, which gives a very disorienting experience.I really would like to read this entire story, but as the reviews and comments probably indicate by their lack of numbers, its a really tough read to get through.Should the author find the time to streamline his or her formatting to a more legible level such as those often seen with the more popular novels on here, then I would love to continue reading it.As it stands, I had to lower my rating because of the formatting and legibility of the novel.I think the author would greatly improve the fanbase numbers for his or her novels if they'd invest some time into researching this and applied the lessons learned to the entire novel.
The story have interesting idea. At first I thought it's a Tokyo Ghoul story but actually it was not alike so much. Then I think this story very captivating and make me wants to read more. It's has a nice storyline and characteristics too. I'll recommended this to those who love a story like this! It has unique vibes!
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