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hello dear author i go through your your book and it was so interesting but i discover that you lack follower, reads and rating but am not sure if you have any social media platforms so we can discuss better
I like this a lot is it dropped thou normally when a author takes a month off they disappear forever.
bro can you create a novel where a Indian mc is there, because I really want to read novel that, your writing style is awesome, I am following your first novel. I really hope you can write that kind novel.
This is a good read. I like the characters and the storyline is very good. All I got to say keep up the good work. Please do not drop the novel, I like it very much.
Very interesting novel that hooks the reader. Very good charactrr development and from what I read ot has great potential. I will definitely be back to binje read it good job jordi
It is good original novel and mc is face smacking and op type with comedy and game elements tag it is another good virtual reality novel thanks for your work!!!!P.S how many chapters will u release in a week .??
Loving the concept.When would there be chapters?#ANTICIPATION???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
Full of action already from the first chapter! There were some minor errors with punctuation and wordings but the built up to the story is nice. I also like how mysterious the FL is, I want to get to know her! keep writing author!
Hey WebNovel, how about finishing all the existing stories you picked up earlier, before you start translating new novels. In the last year you dropped like 5 or 6 popular novels which were completed for 50-70%Seriously, whats the point for me to buy premium for this novel or other, if in the end you are going to drop it midway? I'd much more prefer if I can get 6 chapters daily from one novel, instead of 2 chapters from 3 novels. I'd even pay some money since its that what you are after, but like don't even think about getting a dolla from me before you pick up the novels you dropped and finished the existing translations. But if you still try to take new novels, at least pick up something good. Or else you will loose majority of your readers. You will not get any profit like this, c'mon, WebNovel dawg, you can get 1 dollar from 100000 average readers or 10 dollars from 100 rich readers, its obvious which is more profitable. You get my idea, right?Guys please like this comment so that webnovel will hopefully see it and finish the existing translations ASAP before switching to new books.
While I was quite invested initially. Over time the book become convoluted and too confusing. There were time-skips/changes which at the time weren't explained well and led to me just skimming the pages, hoping to get back to the story. So while the grammar was good and the story seemed fun, I was just unable to get back into the story and my interests had faded.
It's a good storyUpdate more.
A hidden gem that shines with darkness captivating its audience the more you read, sending a shiver down your spine at the dark writing style. The action is fantastic, the characters interesting, and I don't just mean the main one. While there is some spelling error, nothing is lost and could be easily fixed. I really look forward to more releases.
