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Beautiful book!! Short chapters yet so good. Thriller and romance together is really rare and I lovee this!!!!!!!!!!!! Toooo goood to beeeee truee
Great story with great potentiel.It gave me Naruto vibes ( the conflict between Madara and Hashirama )I wish you all the luck ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤???
Its ok the use better development but other than that I like it a lot I just wish it got more detail on the world and the way they got to the point of life
The usual, 3* for World Building and Update Stability since it's new. To sum it up, it's Supernatural + Gantz = this novel; certain people becomes players in a Supernatural type setting. The concept is very intriguing if you're into the horror type genre that dabbles into mmorpg game mechanics. The MC, in my opinion, is someone you either love or hate. I'll give you 4 examples of what kind of character he is; Dr. House, Everett Backstrom, and Sherlock from both versions which are BBC's Sherlock and Elementary. A very intelligent a*shole. In the beginning I was put off because of the MC's character. If you can grind and get past that and somehow reach the end (which is currently chapter 60), then the story seriously opens up. Granted his attitude still ticks me off, but the story is good enough to maybe carry the entire novel, maybe. The story is about an event that happens on Earth which allows certain people to become players in a game that involves ghosts, mysticism, the undead and other supernatural phenomenon. So far, the goal is to find, accept and complete missions that deals with the unknown, level up and repeat the process.No spoilers so the only thing I can say is that there is a twist. Verdict: 50/50 depending on your mood and preference.
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Loved it!Amazing work from amazing author!///////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
smh you shouldn't went premium you need to fix up your story and get better reviews in the comments section before making people have to pay to read you already have one story on that you should have used this one to grow that's all I had to say I saw improvement in the last couple chapters but now i wont know if your going to improve anymore
This story has the potential to become something great! I hope that you are able to continue to develop the story at a good pace at the highest quality!
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God dude. Brain dead. The amount of face-slapping is dumb. Ao Cheng, the second character is so dumb that they try to justify it. I don't know how I got to chapter 122. It was a waste of coins tbh. The System this thing talks about doesn't appear for 50 chapters, and the choices the mc picks are bad. Don't waste your time on this one.
I think this novel has something interesting... its been a long time since I read a novel with multiple leading characters and it's very good written.Expectant about future development !
