First, i've only read the free chapters, so maybe it is building up in these.Everybody in this novel is absurdly tall, now you may say, it's okay that the 3 mentioned characters are above 6ft 5 tall, but I think it describes good what is missing here. There is a bunch off good ideas and concepts, but they are sadly put into a imaginary world, where the MC is the only person who can think a bit out of the box. Well not even that, everybody else would have to be plain stupid to miss this many points in the story.a bit similar to moonlight sculpturer, which is also not a novel, where logic plays a big role.This review is part of my new agenda: every novel off my list gets an review ( good Or now so)While my resume sounds really evil, I have to admit I really wanted this story to develop, just like you see your kid taking it's first steps, and you hope they take another, and not to crawl again.
So: a really good premise and an interesting ability. Special forces and an ability that can multiply or reduce the laws of physics and other peoples powers, which gives a solid base to build a story on.Character design: Starts out really good, the MC seems well thought of. But then the "legal loli" appears and he turns into a horn dog. She pampers him, he is - this close to fudging her and what the heck happened to my nice story and the good premise?World Background: Actually great, well thought of and interesting.Writing Quality: Pretty good for a Webnovel.
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Interesting story so far I do recommend it. The writing quality is not bad only a little rough in a couple of places. ???????????
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I honestly like this novel but this should be a magic/cultivation novel but MC is using Guns instead of trying to learn his abilities, he has all these tools but literally never uses them. Also, there are places in the novel where the chapter ends and you think alright ill get an answer to that sentence or question in the next chapter but no not at all it's like things are forgotten. Otherwise, I could see this as a great novel, we have an okay mc, bombshell waifu, magic/cultivation, action, tragedy.
The power spike right from the start is just too much to keep this story intresting. You may like this story if op mcs are your thing but I will have to,pass on this on.
Alright my third iteration lol,This novel is not the usual run of the mill cultivation novel you see out there. MC won't just blindly slaughter or save every dog and chickens he sees on the road lol.Pros - 1. A collected, mature(not beta) and playful MC who is not too cold that his face looks like a frozen block of ice without any expressions despite his tragic past. 2. Interesting and entertaining story and plot lines that would keep you guys on edge and want to read more. The plot won't be simply about leveling up and jumping to higher realms like other novels but there would be gripping, dramatic and heart wrenching events.3. MC's girls won't be two dimensional nor would they be left behind and forgotten. They each play a important role in the story. The Romance has and will be well fleshed out unlike usual novels where MC simply chances upon a beauty and insta meet and have snu-snu. 4. The world building has been structured properly and the power levels explained(glossary also included). MC's powers are intriguing(Necromancy included oops spoiler) and not cliched. It would be fun for you guys to see how he is going to use them.5. I think the writing quality is at least satisfactory that won't bore holes in one's brain. Till at most Chap 80, there might be elementary mistakes and small grammatical mistakes, but trust me I will edit it as soon as I get the time. First time writing so can't help it.Cons -1. Please somehow hold on till chap 20 as I feel like I might have tried to convey the information in a poor way. Maybe some might not feel that way but for those who does, I can say that you won't regret if u read on after chap 40.2. The story might seem like a slow start since I wanted to build up the world first and convey it to readers. Maybe this might not have been the best way but it does pick up pace from chap 50 onwards. Again this depends on one's perspective while some might feel the pace is fine.3. I don't know if this is a con or what...but some might feel the mysteries are too annoying or something like that. But please be patient as they are revealed along with the plot and you guys won't regret reading further. Where's the fun if all the mysteries are shown to you all at the beginning of the story itself?----Finally, thank you for taking the time to at least look at my novel and reading it. Also, appreciate all the powerstones and support you guys are giving me :DP.S (Harem haters pls avoid this novel and don't post a review saying that you hate harem since I already mentioned it in the tags, ty)
If this story is not up next week then I’m going TO ABSORB ALL OF YOUR BLOOD ESSENCE AND CULTIVATION, SO VOTE NOW!! I HAVE BEEN WAITING FOR NEARLY A YEAR AND I AM AT THE END OF MY PATIENCE, IF THIS IS NOT UP NEXT WEEK IM ALSO GOING TO CURSE EVERYONE WHO DID NOT VOTE!!
This is a good novel, I daresay! If you're not willing to go through at least 80 chapters then don't bother leaving a sh*tty review! The plot is good, the comedy is great, but there is only one thing I am a bit concerned about. That is - I hope this novel doesn't have any of those racist 'nationalism' crap that keeps popping up every now and then on other novels.
Author pls fix the mc it's really annoying ..........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................