*This review is based on the first 5 chapters*Constructive Criticism:I suggest that you get an editor, there is many errors in your grammar in chapter(s) 1(-2). I am bad at such myself or I’d help out. Also I can’t see enough of whether this is going to be a good story off the first 5 chaps, I really like to have more story by this point. Positive Feedback: Good character build up and a nice story Idea. Keep up the good notes of what you are doing.;,;.Personal Feedback: I will continue this at another time to see whether I like this book or not, as I said, the first 5 chaps aren’t enough. However, If why I am keeping this in my library turns out to be true, I will really enjoy this novel, while if not, than I doubt that I will stick around past chapter 20. Now please don’t let what people say (including myself) stop you from finishing what you started.;,;.
I really like this novel and hope you don’t drop it. I’ve seen to many great novels get dropped. ////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Please keep the novel uppp!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What struck me first was your writing ability, one of the good ones here. Keep it up. Just started the book and it seems really good, nice plot, interesting characters. I will add it to my library, it looks like a book I will enjoy.
Don't really like Korean names but overall it is good.............. Best of Luck Btw Is the Lunatic the um.. Choi Hye Su dk if this is the correct name.
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You are doing great, writer and the story seems very interesting. You will get more and more readers in the future. I wish you all the best for your book ❤️❤️. Everyone should definitely check this book out.
Well it was sure intresting read so far. Author has presented the love story in unique and interesting way. I literally can't wait for more chapters to read what further happens in story. If you are fan of hot romantic story this is sure pick for you.
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This is is great so far and I hope you don’t drop so fast f you like this story I found another one like it it’s called everybody likes big chest and it’s about a mimic taking over the world one bite trap at a time
I applaud the author for trying to make a buck in English, but a mtl original isnt gonna do it for me. Run on sentences, incorrect tenses, repeated concepts and some phrases that don't make sense in English are peppered throughout.
This book is nice, the power is balnaced and good. I also enjoyed everypart of it, it has great writing quality. .This is one of yhe best novel