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So I read it, here's my two cents about this book, at first I like how the story was portrayed by first person but it suddenly change to third person that actually mad me lose interest it changes abruptly. I do not relate to the main character so I was not hook, I think, just my suggestion you should consider changing point to point perspective with considerations. The writing quality it good and it was mysterious but some may not find it catching when the mystery is not that something where when you read it you'll be full of questions, In terms of plot and world building, I think it's good to make it more interesting. Remember, that's just my opinion don't take it to the heart. It's better than average just need some work, keep up the good work
honestly it's not a horrible read but would never spend money on it. the fights are bland as are the characters. they lack personality. there is no transition basically the character is in the dungeon then immediately is in the shop and it happens often
Hi I just want to ask before I start reading this will there be ntr? I've read from other reviews that mc's women gets grope
Disgusting story, apparently some people think abuse is entertaining and "character building" this story makes me want to vomit.
This story has great potential! The plot and the way the author writes the narrative of the characters really are comprehensible and makes the readers immersed in the characters' lives. However, the grammar is a bit off and the capitalization of words needs a little work tho. But overall, the author is a pretty great job!
Like the story and MC so far. MC is witty and smart. Will check in again after the novel has more chapters. Many authors drop novels on this website.
This novel is very good and shows the author completed a lot of research into Japanese mythology and culture. It adds a different perspective compared to the common Chinese books that are usually posted here.
A low quality The World Online that just jumps straight into the story without any real introduction.Quite boring and has very few details.If you havent read The World Online, read that instead. If you have, this will only be that much harder to read.
Hey this is some quality writing. Interesting concept and the characters have depth. I'm looking forward to reading more. Keep up the great work!
i have read ahead and have gotten to some ~200 chapters.from the title you would expect that MC is actually some kind of teacher creating his academy and teaching numerous students etc. if you are expecting this you will be disappointed. MC is just using academy to gather his harem of lolis and academy system is just cover for him to get OP. all of the support characters are young females that are mostly in love with MC.cause of reviews i was constantly expecting for it to suddenly get good like some other similar novels, cause so many ppl did 5 star reviews and were comparing it to them, but that moment never came. there is no comedy and it is rather similar to other system novels. grind, action and nonsensical storyline that is riddled with plot holes and ofcourse deus ex machinas.
Uninspired and the systematical abuse of the english language doesn't make it any more readable. MC doesn't reincarnate as much as gets perma-logged into a goblin body. Attempts at explaining the game world makes it just more confusing as dimensions are not the authors strong suit. Stats are there just for the number to go up and seem to be arbitrarily infinite or completely gone depending on the situation, no feel whatsoever for any aspect of reality in this novel