CarlQuintero
love the story...
Emma Swan is one of my fave authors here but I can’t seem to get past chapter 4 on this novel. There is too much narration in between convos. Will it get better? I find one or two dialogue in one page and I’m hoping it picks up going forward.
Hilarious, fun Victoria makes me laugh ... continue job well done I am glad Sheryl is out do not let her come near him please develop the story between Tyler ,Althea and her cutie Kai
I simply loved this book and still being sad this beautiful serie is finished.
Please keep writing this brilliant book, I really need to know who her baby daddy is, whether A accepts her. Who's the other Alpha? The fact that she's normal, a chunky lady like me. As a Mum of 3 I know having a baby can change your body shape and some people can be nasty to you.
This is such a good book but when will it finish? I want to know how it ends.
I finally found youuuuu
Does author ever fix grammar or not?
It is one of the best but sadly it's on a hiatus for more than a year now
It is really light cute novel. It is also translated well. There some scenes and characters that I wish the author should delve more or added more scenes for the FL and ML to have more deeper feeling to each other. I don't know maybe it just me, I feel like their sudden deep feeling for each other doesn't make sense or is it just like the novel is too fast paced. The first few chapters is really fun but it became a bit boring towards the end, I also feel like the epilogue is rushed. If you want something to read that is not complicated at all and you just want to read something new with no high expectations, I recommend this novel.
Ok. The novel quality itself is good but It have too much plot armor. I cannot stand it anymore, the plot armor is very obvious and not logical. It prevents the MC from making money when there are already so many ways to do so but prevented by shallow excuses. Like in the ancient ruin, it is obvious that they prevented disaster but was not rewarded. Second, when he was provoked by iron adventurers, if it is common sense he will make those to pay for damages instead he willingly pay for it. Then it was when they killed a wolf, it was said that they can profit from it but they chose not because they have no knives and many more. Hayst if he was broke he must be eager to earn money but he was against common sense.
Hello , you can translate it , but I would recommend you to refer to the chinese raws too as it’ll be more accurate .thank you ???
