Seemed interesting at the start but strength and plot progression are really wack.
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it starts out great, but every thing is over explained , I guess it would be a great book for someone who knows nothing about video games, ill continue to read more when I'm less annoyed with reading every little thought and action someone takes
I quite like it. And it's original so props to you. .
Don't be fooled by the 4 &5 stars reviews.The story is trash, full of plotholes for the sake of plot, 0 proofread, its worse than the usual trial read. Don't waste your braincells on this.
Everything in this novel looks beautiful. The writing, the wording, the characters, the emotions, the conflict, the mystery, the questions, this story has it all. The character design is really amazing, the plot of this story is rather unique, and the interactions from character to character really feel real. The landscape descriptions and the actions of some parts are very dynamic and fluid. I can easily picture a scene inside my mind with these chapters. I like how you plan ahead and make this world truly not empty.Keep up the good work, and continue to write!
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One of the better novels I have come across in the read free section.A captivating read. When the author is on point you will be hard pressed to find a better read. At times the author gets bogged down in development or distracted but this doesn't detract from the story and doesn't last long. I think this is more updating frequency and story catching up to where author has fully flushed the story.Character development and interactions is some of the best. I'm a binge reader so this is something I notice in almost all novels and tends to be hard to maintain. not noticeable if you read 20 chapters a day but noticable when 100 chapters in a day. and this is the only reason I couldn't give it 5 stars.wether you binge read or read a little at a time this novel will keep calling you back that's for sure
The MC is a soldier who dies in a confrontation with another country, the world that he is transmigrated is similar to the old one but with superpowers, it's pretty obvious the future racism.
The story follows an evil MC, which is my kind of thing.This genre is quickly becoming popular as the plethora of cookie cutter goody two shoes MCs are becoming stale fast.The author does a good job of portraying the evil acts committed by the MC as being logical and driven by personal gains and not as being cartoonishly evil.This makes the reader question what is right and what is correct, is a act driven by self interest right even if it's not always morally correct?I personally can't wait to follow Ying Zheng on his journey.PS. Also the *snafu* *snafu* are quite hot
The story has a japanese feel to it.Quite heart warming and it has plenty of heart warming moments.Encourage readers to add this story.