Love it! Hooked after the 1st chapter. And then the 2nd hits and before I know it the 3rd xD it flows sooo well. And I felt terrified right along with her ? the way you write is amazing. Time to keep reading ?
just don't drop it like the other novels
Amazing novel, ? the synopsis and title alone immediately captured me. Keep it up author ?
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Hello I want to express my gratitude to you, PancakesWitch author, for creating such a fantastic narrative with a well-written main character. I love your novel Epic Caterpillar, but I have a question for you: will SYLPHY be able to a boyfriend in later chapters? I think SYLPHY can have both a boyfriend and a girlfriend because I want SYLPHY to be able to start a family and having kids, just like in the famous Caterpillar book. I don't really mind yuri, especially Aquarina.
This is mtl, unedited, chunks of the chapters are missing too. Like usually a third to half of each chapter is missing. You’re better off finding the raw and mtl it yourself. Raw name is 诸天世界的天道, according to novelupdates.
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Wow. This novel is packed with sooo much!!! The writer definitely planned out their chapters and no errors in English that I could find! Definitely people! Read this novel and get immersed in the world our dear author created!
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looks like a hunie pop but without the candy crush part .........................................................................................................................
This story has so many unbearable cliche. The MC rent the house, but who would expect to see a "Young and beautiful Lady who has some points of grace?" He say. If we are given this scenerio on a novel, we can predict the outcome. And yes, "I'm surprised" that the Young Lady is from the Wealthy Family?! Who would expect that? Then again, I held back my "surprise" and read the next chapters. And again, who would thought that in the same place where the mc was and saw the "Young Lady" got chased by some people (the BodyGuards of this young lady's father) and by chance, the young lady saw the MC and have him as a shield. Not "surprised" because of the ridiculous strength of the MC he been putting nonstop on his status, he defeated the body Guards. Huh, who would expect that? and with that, I stopped reading and wrote this review. 5 Stars because the Story is Nice, just the "execution" is bad and sooo cliche.
As a gift to myself for Christmas I have decided to join the shameless sect and give myself five stars. Seriously though I'm just starting out on this story and I'm enjoying writing it and seeing where things take me. Hopefully this helps me improve my skills and I get better the further along I get in the story. There are several things I have in mind for this novel, but I don't want to spoil anything so I'll keep that talk to myself for now. I hope you guys continue to read and support my book. Comments and critiques are welcomed, but try to be nice to each other in the comment section. Oh and yes even you exp. guys are welcome to come if you want. Thank you for your time.