I love this Web Novel i can't wait for the next chapters. I like the characters till now especially the mc he feels pretty relatable to me!!Can't wait to see his character development and how the upcoming character will flactuate him!
Man that's a great story for a Beginner, Keep on writing and don't forget to improve you skills on the same time. And last don't abandon the story. All the best??
hope the locked chapters can be read in other sites . Cant afford to pay for the chapters cause its alot from where im from. Thanks for the reading experience though.
Rocky's story is interesting to discover and each of his thoughts has a genuine feeling of reality behind it. The writing can be a bit better, but the plot and storyline are engaging. Every character is intriguing and the author has done a great job in showing their personality through well-written dialogues. Overall, nice job!
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It's alright, not good but also not terrible. The translation needs a bit more work . . . . . . . ...?
It started off great but sometimes the flow of the story is forced. There is even a time that i skjpped 10 chapters cause it didnt make sense and it felt like it steered so much from the main idea or topic of this book. It gets better and it gets worse so i guess read at your own risk.
Seems like the best out of this rounds trial reads. Characters are pretty humorous, plot seems engaging and logical.
so the mc is supposedly pretty smart but then does some idiotic things. but, he got better toward the end so there's hope yet. I've read alot of worse CNs. one thing I'd like to say is that so far the old guys in this story rock! their fighting spirit is great lol!!! I'll keep reading once the rest is released.
I only recently discovered this story on Webnovel, where I'm new. Since I love anime, I'm genuinely curious. I believe I can concur with the good things other people have said.
I love it just not enough chapters
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