He had to admit, the difference between the usual her and this elegant woman were very vast. He too, would not recognise her if not for the aura she emitted. It's just too alluring for him to not able to see it. Every moves she makes displays elegant dominance. Her every steps looked like a clear flow of water. With the hint of cheekiness surrounded by the flashlights of the camera, it was just too domineering for him.
A proposition? What on Earth…?
Strength: 3
And I'm gone.
*sigh* still waiting for an update ????
Uptill where I have read this is a great story bases on evolution. And I like how he is not confined to one form. Instead of having and exp leveling system. He has to gayher bloodlines and energies which is I find interesting. Overall a great read. I hope thr author keeps writing it.
"I'll trouble you, Bayo, to take care of this." The snake bowed to the horse man, then slithered to the barrier. "Ahas, follow me!"
"Whoa" he said. "Can I join?"
The fiery tornado dissipated and Phoenix collapsed on the ground. Crusher was still fighting Strocker but it wasn't going well, he had cuts all over him like the sword had barely missed him.
"Why wasting energy to save him? He is an embarrassment to our sect. Is there really no one else better than him in our sect." Lei Wang once again shown his disgust at how weak the people in the Wing Sect's branch at this world.
The story is so slow and it all come to where it started from whenever the male lead does something. Like really dude, if you could work a bit on the Male lead's character, the novel would have been so good because literally, everything else other then the male lead is good.
Okay - so how do I say this nicely? This story sucks. Don't take me wrong - I mean, it's a good story with okay characters, but MAAAN, there's a LOT of inconsistencies and plot holes. I mean really - a ton of stuff where the author just changes tune on a whim. Just to give you a few examples;Early on in the story, the MC has a crush on the principal, and then suddenly the author mentions that the MC will take the principal on a date, but without the dialogue ever having taken place. Yes, this is just a benign example, but it gets worse later on, for example, in the latter end of the story, the author does away with the cultivation scheme that the reader is used to and suddenly introduces "levels".In my opinion, the author is a classic example of not having a clear structure of their world, history, and the characters in it. You will often find contradictory statements in chapter to chapter - and this is just one of many problems with the story.To be nice, the author does have nice character development and relationships. The MC doesn't just fall for the main love interest straight away but falls the friend, and through loss and hardships, realizes his feelings for the main girl - really nice, which is something that many other Chinese novels fail in. But this doesn't make up for what should be the concrete fundamentals of every story - CONSISTENCY!This story will definitely offer you a fresh take on a MC which isn't completely ignorant of his feeling. No face slapping or arrogant young masters at every turn with okay story progression. If you get hung up on details such as plot details and the author contradicting himself, then you should stay FAR away.Overall, I read up to chapter 500+ before skimming the rest of the chapters due to getting fed up with these points. The story end nice, however, as much as this story may portray itself as a single love interest, in the last 50 chapters, the MC suddenly gets himself a harem - also one of the things which will throw off a lot of its ******** readers.Final statement; it really feels like a story written by 2 or 3 different authors, with too many different cultivation methods, contradictory statements and views, vague/confusing races (e.g. Ivantians - which are apparently people who live on the Moon, and Kaedians (which I still don't who are or where they came from)). So yea, although, I'm generally forgiving in nature, this story just felt like a downright mess. It entertained me the first 100 chapters, but after that, I slowly got more and more fed up with it.