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Scared witless by Jacob's sudden action, Amelia was about to smack him but stops with a dumbfounded expression. Lifting her finger, Amelia points at Jacob then slowly shifts her finger to Grandfather Galen, "Jacob, this is who? I didn't hear you correctly."
"Oh he's a troublemaker like you boy. If he doesn't end up dead, he'll be someone special." Etenani shook his head and sank into silence. Nikolai was surprised by his Master's thoughtful expression and the casual compliment. Every time he met Etenani, age and drink were further taking their toll on him. Already his voice creaked and his complexion faded. New wrinkles were digging into Etenani's skin, the vibrant glow in his eyes dimming more often with cheeks slowly sinking in since his Apprenticeship.
Echidna : "That is something that concerned me as well."
The door opened with no resistance and in the center of the room they found Rey who was restrained in the interrogation chair. Finn immediately approached and checked on her, finding that she was unconcious with marks in many parts of her body which showed the torture she had suffered for information. This sight made him feel his heart bleeding in pain. He immediately released the tie ups and received her in his arms. After a while Rey woke up and panicked.
Readers may appreciate the philosophical exploration of immortality in a realm where mortality is the driving force behind cultivators' actions. The protagonist's unconventional approach of avoiding direct confrontation to achieve immortality creates anticipation for how the story will unfold.
Quick summary for the interested.This is one of the best novels of this particular genre(Female Lead, businesswoman, romance, some superpowers).Its a very sweet and loving story and just gives you very happy feelings reading it. Ofcourse there's the classic face slapping scenes, which are always quite satisfying.If you have read other novels of this genre you should generally know what to expect so i wont go in depth. I'll only one thing more.The last 80 chapters were too rushed....It could easily be extended to more than 300-400 chapters. It felt like the author just have up on the story end rushed to end it. Many reveals could be so much better but what can i say, the author maybe has his own circumestances...Still i was a bit dissapointed since i really enjoyed the story until the last 80-100 chapters.Anyway, i still recommend this it was very good until the end.
It was just like that white tea when they first met that summer. The delicate aroma of that white tea was long lasting and always fresh.
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Yup, this is great. Need more chapters. MC seemed to have its own qualities and 3vem though it's a little farfetched I still like it. Continue the good work author.
Hi, author here, the things you would expect in my novel.First- This is a heavy kingdom building and war, so if you like an adventure type of novel, then this is not for you.Second- The grammar is bad, I know that. Because I didn't know that there is Grammarly or any related app, I only started using this app around Chapter 50. Although I redoing 3 chapters a day it will still take some time before I can redo all the chapters.Third- the mc's personality is cruel to his enemy and soft to his subjects. Moreover, the mc is acted like a king, even though he already had just started his village, some readers might find that annoying. The reason for that is, the mc already a season king on the game he played. So he took that personality with him in this new world.Third, if this is a harem, still not decided, if this is R-18 still not decided.I don't write on inkstone so changing anything is a little hard for me, so I hope you understand. This is my first book, so I can take all the critic as long as you read enough chapters.
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