NinRider
A classic example of a good cultivation story. The writing is good and its easy to read and understand. A good example of a rags to riches story what I like more then the basic OP MC
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i just love this novel ..nowadays you get to see novel where mc is perverted or evil or indifferent or selfish and where in many novel pure family relationships is not there.so i like most in here is way mc family value relationship and mc too is a responsible and positive person so this novel has become my favorite.also i like it because of harem of course but grammar and lemon chapters are good too.i would recommend people to give it a try .and author please i hope you don't discontinue this novel.
The start of the novel is nice, every one can relate to a few things written, but it's an unexpected story. I will appreciate author for the long chapters, it will give the reader satisfaction even if you would update one chapter a day. Keep up the good work.
The first few chapters were a bit boring to me, but the novel gets much better from the 40th chapter and onwards when he starts interacting with the others. IMO, It is one of the best original novels here. There are 2 chapters/day.
I honestly don't know what to review here. I just like story. Or more accurately, the MC. I've always like a little psychopathic MC, but not the really heartless one, cause they're boring. And I like that the author decided to include his friend. I looked for many stories, but most of them are about romance. It's a nice breath of fresh air to include friendship in. Basically, this novel fulfills two condition that I've always been looking for, a crazy but funny MC, and things other that just romance. please keep up the good work author ^_^
I really love this story the action the characters all of it is amazing. I just wish more chapters were out the but the actual story line is glorious top 10 fav
this book started out pretty great but now it's like the author is just throwing concepts together and doing whatever he wants first it was like magic rune cultivation with a system that allowed him to turn English words into runes which he barely used even though it turned him op from the get go now its turned into beast taming and it's like he got nerfed hard there's no real explanation for power systems levels or whatever you call it extremely lacking there also now his system somehow became a beast taming system that let's him upgrade his beast get exp and gives him mission I just don't understand
it would be amazing if this was made into a comic. I have difficulty imagining the story because of the wnglish grammar. but it would be better if he had someone experienced edit it
I cant believe I wasted my time reading this, isnt this suppose to be a world or monsters & ability? Instead we've got gang fights & underground fights. It feels like it's been written by a gang member or someone who loves to join a gang but never got the opportunity
