Hey author! Why didn't you tell me that you joined the contest? Nevermind that but I will vote for your work tomorrow okay? I will pour any power stones that I have. Just until the contest ends. Hope I would be of help. Your story has potential and I enjoyed it. To winning!
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Patience is one thing but the mc doesn't Even show a bit of frustration and anger despite being mistreated by national team selectors and then being benched just thinks that he just needs to play honestly its becoming frustrating to continue reading now it seems he doesn't even have a spine to confront and seem coward if you're gonna make him "god of football" as the tiltle says atleast make him look like that he is way to laid back.and what's this bullshit about i will prove with my performance you can't just fu*ki*g keep getting him subbed on last minutes and like a hero he will score hattrick like he did in the last league game.
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I'm not really a fan of reading MMORPG theme or any game novels.I read a few chapters and I find the story interesting. The writing quality is good and so is the stability of updates. The story is developing nicely. The Character design as well as the world background are well defined.The novel has a good potential. It is a re write of an earlier contracted novel.All the best,author!
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Everything about this novel is decent, excluding the number of updates in a week part. The grammar is good, the story is stable and doesn't change its plot randomly. Again, I would be happier if the author increased the number of updates in a week! What kind of author forces its readers to cultivate the dao of patience?!!
The stability of updates is great. Writing quality is okay, needs some work on grammar though.Unfortunately its to cringy to read. The MC acts like a 5 year-old, to the point of my thinking he actually was a young child during the first chapter until i realized he was 15... There are a lot of plot holes too, this can be seen even in the first few chapters... for instance the MC's parents for absolutely no reason decide it is a great idea to force a child to become the ruler of literally the entire universe at 8 years old. Despite being a ruler the MC never attended any banquets, to the point of him mistaking a restaurant for one...Wanted to like it but the entire thing just comes off as way to forced.
Really interesting concept and the writing is done well, I dont understand why it doesnt receive as much attention as it should, probably because it still has very little chapter! Keep it up man :)
This novel is still still incredibly overrated due to 1) someone spamming 5 star reviews over and over, and 2) the novel itself is written very poorly. Sentences are stilted, with no real descriptions. It's like I'm reading a play giving bare bones directions, not a book. These characters don't feel real.
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You said it’s not cool to read 1 chapter and drop 1 star reviews? Your right, that’s fucking gay. Whoever does that should kill themselves. What is cool though, is not reading a single chapter and drop a 5 star review. You ask, why is that cool? Because it just is, don’t question it. So now author, I ask you a question. How’s your day?