Ewaan
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I love this book. can't wait to be able to read more of this. I have enjoyed being able to actually sit down and read this book all the way through.
please make more ive read to the most recent chapter out which is 30 and absolutely fell in love!the MC is OP but notIn his level range he is litterally undefeatable. He can fight other abouve his level too Ex: he is level 50 as of chapter 30 and can fight a level 180 who has a buff activated for times 3 attributes.However above level 700 powerhouses exsist so he isnt OPThe city mayors level is 400 and level 100 is needed for college exam so many people are high level so MC is not end all OP but he definitely has the potential to reach it.Now I shall use this GIF to attract attention so people will read the review.
This is going to be an honest review from someone who has read a fair amount of books and novels. To begin with you have a very cliche MC. Typical video game plot and leveling system which isn't necessarily a bad thing. The MC uses about 0% of his brain constantly which leads to lots of plot holes and making the readers angry with his stupid and illogical decisions. The book starts off with ok grammar if you can overlook the misuse of present and past tense as well as constant spelling errors but as it continues the grammar only gets worse. It gets so bad that almost every other sentence looks like a five year old wrote it and it honestly gives me a headache. The plot isn't that bad, its the grammar that needs to be fixed. Please hire someone to fix it.
This novel starts off with a really strong hook and I was hella excited for where i thought it was heading. It seemed like a really interesting new type of management novel with some solid drama and characterization and the MC really came out strong and overcame difficulties to claw his way to a win and set up a path of success. And then everything after that is just effortless and completely overpowered and it turned into just another virtual reality game novel with the 'comedy' largely consisting of "haha wow look at the craaaaaaazy antics these epic memers get up to." The MC is just barely mentioned beyond having a reaction now and again, large sections of the novel now are just interactions between random npcs you don't care about making stale jokes from 10 years ago, there's only a very tenuous connection to internal consistency with how the author vaguely makes excuses why everything he does is absurdly overpowered, actions stop having consequences so its hard to care about any of the characters and you can never feel a sense of crisis...I suppose its still worth reading if you have nothing better to do but with how original the first couple chapters were and how cliche it turned out when the story just stopped focusing on the interesting bits.... It almost seems like they switched authors. Definitely worth a look in the first couple chapters but i wouldn't waste spirit stones on it.
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Nicely written. Interesting to read. Even though there are some hard to digest story turns, generally it is great. Hopefully it will get even Better in the future.
First chapter in and I already know it’s a trash quality translation. I should have got the hint on the synopsis when the MC’s name was translated to Junior Leopard.Unsubscribed, banned and throwed it in the bin. Please filter out your translators and don’t just accept random strangers you see walking on the road.
This novel hurts me like no other. It is one of the best stories I've ever read but the author seems to have trouble with consistency. The chapters first came fast and furious but then big breaks come and there was no updates for months without a warning.So months without an update? Why!!?But the inconsistency of release aside, this is one hell of an adventure story. I've followed this story for probably 2 to 3 years now, and I still can't give up despite the author's lack of updates. I hope he comes back and finish the story lol.
This is one of the better slowly developed novels out there on this platform. It’s not too fast pace as with some other novels where other MCs just go * here * and there. This book has one of the best by far character developments and gives you an insight on how really each persons relationship to the MC is. The character development is too a point where you may even feel connected and share feelings with them. Another great thing of this novel is the MC powers and strengths. By that I mean how it is slowly growing from weak to strong but not in a fashion you’d feel like it is “just another” novel, such as the MC actually experiencing failure, issues that prevent him from doing something; basically he has challenges and as a quick summary, overall this is a great novel!Keep up the great work author! Cool perk is as of this moment, reading this novel is 100% free!TLDR: Amazing novel with really good character development and his “OPness” isn’t instant which leads to quite an exciting read overall. Give this a try if you haven’t already!
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This is a very curious story. The protagonist has no need for food or water and takes no pleasure eating. He seems indifferent to most things around him and doesn't like the sun. The one thing that he does seem to like is sleeping. This reminds me of the story—forget the exact title"What does it feel like to be a Vampire." He seems to find zero satisfaction in living. At least, unlike the vampire dude, he ain't as bald as a cue-ball. On the other hand, he IS missing both arms and a leg—but he is confident that he can find and reclaim his missing limbs. It does give a motive for VENGEANCE but he doesn't seem very stoked on vengeance either. Not sure if I will continue reading this one for much longer...
