Exquisite story. I can tell the author put a lot of effort in to it
Do yourself a favour and read it in wuxiaworld, they have more free chapters and they cost less. Dethblade has worked hard, these guys they stole the translationa nd are making you pay for it
100/10. Great book and the story are....noice.
Geat not like the others who are murder hobos he even repays his debts, he doesn’t stopp willy nilly even if he does still he will compensate the person, he is also smarter making like having an actual disguise so should actually read good novel 4/5 in my books
Author here. Just letting people know that the idols talked about here are VTubers. Think along the lines of Hololive. That's all I have to say.
I'mma be honest first 3 or so chapters were really good and I was excited for the rest. The writing quality could be a little better but I'm just being a little bit picky. However I feel like everything when he got to the highschool was just not that good though. For example "the big breasted beauty" ok fine if you were just talking about her breasts... whatever; Not every other time you are talking about her though! It just comes across as lazy. Also, don't make a girl get a crush on him from walking in the room it's kinda awkward. I get that you may like anime but the mc speaks interchangeably different languages and you didn't translate ecchi to pervert or something similar? Sorry I don't want to be too harsh. I'll still read it as well. But the writing makes the girls seem very 2 dimensional and just not very interesting. I don't want to try to tell you what to do but at least in my opinion the story would be much more compelling and interesting if you made the girls less like the 2d cutouts in bad harem anime.Finally this is not super important but Is the MC black? I mean I assumed so since he was one of the first humans. Not to be racist or anything but almost no one in Japan is black so usually it would usually be noted in a Japanese girls internal thoughts. Is that why everyone comments on how black his hair and eyes are?I don't usually post criticism but I liked the story at the start so I wanted to give my 2 cents.
We really need mooaaaaaaarr of this please do something we can't even vote for it because it is not the editor's choice what can we do to continue reading this?????We need moaar sectMoarMoaarMoaaarMOAAAAAAAR
I wish I could give it a full five stars, but the update frequency is zero right now due to the story being on a break. The writing is very good, and I really like how the story is playing out so far (26/40). Excited to see where this goes!
The only reason I voted for this novel is because thestatsguy returned and gave us information on this novel. I didn't even read the synopsis. Thus, on this day I voted for thestatsguy.
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this is a far cry from peerless 1 he became a beta useless MC in here, he will always make his enemy lived again and again and again even when those enemy tried to kill him and his loved ones
ok..Synopsysis seems coolbut is this the same author from 40 millenniums of cultivation?I hope this book is as good as that one.if it is then this deserves to join my best book ever list and bcom a legend