Shameless Author here. The Mandalorian series has revived my interest in Galaxy. Ahsoka Tano played by Rosario Dawson. She's awesome. Magic and fighting games are forever. I don't hide the fact that Lee Long character is a kind of collective image of Naruto and Harry Potter. It makes me feel good to write this story. This is my first book and I wrote novel mainly to improve my writing skills. If you find it interesting, comment or give me a honest review. It will be very helpful to me. That's it guys, have fun reading!
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I have read till 60 chps and from what i gathered, the writing style is rather bland. Nothing interesting seems to happen and there is no x factor which makes u binge read a book. Or maybe it is a translation problem. Our mc is reborn in a village and he has 1 year (can be extended) to make a top magical academy or he dies. He is beither too strong or too weak. Just mehh. Personality wise, he is like a lazy dude who just goes through the same itenary everyday. So much so that it has become boring. Wake up- Teach magic to loli - attempt a dungeon -repeat. The writing style is so stupid that it skips the reward part of the dungeon after completion and subtly explains it in later chps. Come on, watching mc get cool rewards is the only reason we go through the dungeon clearing stuff and u gonna skip that?!! In later chps the mc suddenly does a magic or builds a academic building and dumps all its explanation on dungeon rewards. Its so confusing and irritating.His students also look like 1-d characters due to having no pov of thier own. If that's not enough, the mc is a "Good guy" who cant bring himself to kill people and helps people indiscriminately even if that means getting into the cliche troubles knowingly. The world is our typical western fantasy world with elves, trolls, etc. Apparently humans are not the dominant species and are lead by the magicians and the academies. Overall a slow and boring read for me. Maybe it might get better in the latter chps. Give it try. Maybe u might like it. If somebody have read it in mtl, plzz give me a idea of where it goes in latter chps the comments.
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Good stuff I just saw it on another site and I tried to look more into it and found it here and I think this story has so much potential and is more original then the most where people just reincarnate and go back in time but not on this scale or this level I think the story can be and hopefully will be really great good luck on your journey
Trash novel, so generic it hurts, mc is basic as **** his kids really only eat and are used for comedic effect, every woman that sees him cums apparently, then falls in love, hey you looked at me kinda wrongly-welp it's the death sentence mate. The funniest thing is how fucking unrealistic the interactions, btw every second guy they meet wants to **** with the mc, the ones that don't adore him and are ready to suck him off. I can continue but at the same time i don't want you to waste so much time on this ****, unlike me.
I love reading your book! However, I couldn't quite understand the description of the characters, the background, and there were a few grammar problems as well. I suggest some proofreading and your book will be better! I'll be adding this book to my collection to see if you do better!
The chapters are more like paragraphs not more than a few sentences each. And I am having trouble tracking how the story is. All the previous reviews I assume are fake/bots. I honestly gave up after chapter six and that’s the extent of what I know.
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Another crappy novel words are missing here and there in chapters, Over Glorified mc that talks crap to everyone he fights, author stating mc has never retreated from a fight in his entire life of gaming etc and never will here later on mc says he could retreat but doesn't have to, so mc already had a thought process of retreating, also author says at certain power lvl injuries that aren't at the lvl of severed limbs can heal in seconds next chapter a few broken ribs and a crushed hand will take days when chapter before his arm was almost severed healed in seconds etc crap novel