One of the better gamer stories I have read in a good long while. And more than likely one of if not the best DC stories on the site. I very much enjoy the character, and how he isn't an edgy doom lord and how he has actual empathy and maturity to him. He feels powerful without being extremely overpowered to the point of not having any conflict to overcome.I like how the gamer system doesn't get in the way of good storytelling and how there aren't walls upon walls of status descriptions and how the numbers don't get in the way of the action and dialogue.Overall a very good take on the genre of gamer fics and I am looking froward to more.
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I didn't enjoy the ending of this book, there was too much sadness and not enough good parts. it's as if the book was too short, the red eyed just came and went with no explanation of his origin and motivations besides becoming the alpha king. Too much was left unsaid
The author struggles to make something original so he sticks to the same process of mc gets bullied > mc gets powerup > mc kills the bully > bully's relatives avenges the bullies > mc kills the bully's relatives > repeat. It's fun for the first few cycles, but it gets bland as it goes. Although the novel follows the same progression of "doing something new for a change," it's actually basically just a coverup of the fact that the author is incapable of further developing something thus scrapping it and making a new one, on the premise that the story is "developing" when clearly, it's just making a new slate to follow the same cycle, of which only the names of people, places and realms changed.
I'm genuinely surprised this turned out far better than I expected. I was thinking it was just another mediocre simulation story but there's some interesting stuff once you get past the first few chapters.
Alright, I must say that this book is a piece of art! I don't know why it doesn't have a review yet but here is your 5-star, I can say that this book has great potential. The idea about the slimes in the tutorial ground is interesting, I find it enjoyable to read when the MC fought them. I'm wondering when can I meet them again so as to see how will the MC deal with those slimes especially when they had gotten much stronger after they respawned.Speaking of the MC's abilities, it also caught my interest really well. I'm itching to know how will he use these abilities to fight his enemies. But as of now, the MC seemed like he is yet to try it out as he can only use the world's mana. I will watch the MC how will he learn to use those abilities and achieve strength far greater than anyone else. Thank you author for this wonderful story. I hope you have good luck and have peace of mind to maintain writing such a good story.
Hi, author here. I just needed to post this so that everyone that has read this work of mine before can understand. So there are no misunderstandings, first off, I am the original author of this work. I posted this on Wattpad and Royalroad back in my high school days. So you might remember it.Due to some reasons, I needed to remove them. Now, this might seem like that original work of mine, but I added a lot of new scenes and things. So this is a remake of that original work of mine. So I hope you guys don't go around saying I stole this. Cause how can I steal from myself? Alright, that's all I wanted to say to clarify the situation.
Writing needs improvement especially in the grammar area but other than that this story is amazing on its own. The idea is very interesting and each chapter keeps you going. I hardly notice the mistakes because I enjoyed reading this. Hope you don't drop!
Cerita nya menarik, tentang pembalasan dendam dari murid untuk guru nya. Lanjut terus thor, masih penasaran kelanjutan nya... Semangat!???