writing quality 4: to many misplaced comedystory development 4: averagecharacter design 5: pretty well thought and interesting charactersupdating stability 4: averageworld Background 5: give enough information to be interesting but not enough to predict what's gonna happen
Very good story here! Author weaves his character into a new world rather abruptly, but it soon doesnt matter because the new world itself is exciting!!Characters are interesting and have their own thoughts so far; no one takes tne MC for granted and whatnot.But I’m excited to watch our young MC grow more and more powerful as he grows up! Thanks for writing!
There is a lot of potential with this style of writing and I do not want to see it be ruined. The elements for a good story are there but there needs to be a lot more background building and show not tell. The story is being rushed and there are rough transitions peppered throughout the novel. I recommend taking your time to smooth out the story and make it flow. There are good materials present, but you have to use them well.
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well at first I exp but then as I exp further I realised that exp was not just exp, it was actually exp. really an inspirational piece of exp.I exp off to this at night
This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this. It feels like heaven to read, I wanna read it so much. If this novel got some drive, then thanked God its still alive. This novel is so good to be true, can't take my eyes away from this.I need this novel like it's quite all right. I need this novel to warm my lonely nights. Just read this novel, cause I... say...Shameless Promotion:Check out my novel: Blood Burning Blood. Hahaha. https://m.webnovel.com/book/blood-burning-blood_19157009606618805
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I love the story...it's interesting and this is my first time reading this kind of novel about omegaverse. the main characters has really undertanding and amazing family....for the author....update more often pleasee
As a fellow writer about a stone protagonist, I eagerly read this story from a competitor. Their story has a unique premise that takes from a very informed background, keeping things fresh. I can comfortably say that, if you are looking for a sci-fi story with a rock protagonist, this is the story for you. If you want a different story with rock protagonists, there are others around. There is more than enough room for all of us to write in this space and more than enough readers to go around. Brother Space Rock, Little Brother Volcanic Rock greets you. :)
This novel is literally trash. Mc İS a retard and romance is forced af if it is even romance.. mc is changing his mind every second and the world background is literally fuqed, characters are shallow and pontless! _THİS_ _NOVEL_ _İS_ _SO_ _TRASH_ _THAT_ _İT'S_ _PİSSİNG_ _ME_ _OFF_ _!_ usually novels dont anger me or anything this is the first one. İt was so bad i could only read 11 or 12 chapters. İ stopped reading it when he was about to tell his abilities and background or something. And the plot armor... finding that dead mages tomb... why was he hunted for such a long time if the holy church was so 'overpowered' ?
Love the pace of the story and how he explains everything and not just a info dump first chapter. Author really knows how to set the pace of his story.