look the book is great I'm just tired of authors having the character be a baby for the whole trial read there's no action I know the criticism but I like more action and at least a teenager character
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The only person with enough balls and talent to create a meme novel which is actually good. We need more of these. Please make him father followers like a Frog Demon (Pepe), a business Orange Demon (Good old donald), a duck demon which fights with the orange demon (donald duck) and etc.
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Both the story title and synopsis are misleading. The correct title should be ‘Smut Divine System.’ The novel is more about *** and less about the struggle against protagonists. Maybe it will change in the future, given that it’s still in its infancy stage. Who knows.
4th wall breaks at the start are two good. Making fun of cliches, and the comedy is gold. extraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextraextra
Please give it a try, this novel definitely deserve your time. This is my first and only review, as this novel is getting really a little attention despite deserving a much better ranking.Though the first few chapters are a bit plain and confusing, it will get better and better after 20+ chapters. Read it, you really won't be disappointed as the writing style is really unique. A sharp, cunning and decisive MC with good character development and some funny moments here and there which you will definitely enjoy. Though the world building is still lacking, I think it will be explained in time as MC's adventure is yet to begin....
Fix the order of the chapters Some are in the wrong places
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Great novel so far, very well written, writer truly seems immersed in the love of his/her creation. Will be sinking power stones into it in the future. Would love to see this in the higher rankings! Namaste ??
This book is amazing, keep going! Can't stop reading. Can't wait to see more. Do you have any social media that I can follow so I can know when you gonna update?
Hello, two years have passed, due to things in life I left my work unfinished, I had good bad moments during this time like anyone else, but I really don't want to leave my work half done, that's why I took the original material, reviewed it as soon as possible. I corrected it as well as changing some plot holes in order to have a better version, I hope that the new readers, as well as the old ones who had read it before, enjoy it.