"Hehehe.... do you remember me telling you that me and my boys discovered a new plane?" asked Butcher with a grin on his face
Hello, Secret_Ethereal here,A supportive readers and a fellow author. Please keep your hard work. I'm a good judge of book and I could see your book has a potential in the future. Cheer up and don't lose your interest in writing just because you still not find the right person to appreciate your masterpiece. I'm rooting for a new chapter.
Honestly I was hoping this would be a good read and it seemed like it was off to a good start but way to many errors and POV changes at the drop of a hat with no indication of the change. By about Ch 20 I found it al but unreadable.
the book has been intriguing and interesting so far and i hope it continues to improve
I'm very glad to read this novel I really like this novel and this novel made me feel very nice This is very good novel ........This novel and its words r very good and i really like it ..... It is very good novel Love it
Alright, I read chapter 15, and it became borderline unbearable. First of all, the character interactions are dry and seem to be rushed. Second, the MC is unbearable and a complete simp, from the second he met Hilary (his real crush that just happens to conveniently be in the same area as him from the thousands that just randomly spawn in. Plus, his friend is trapped in the game too, but this rich girl who has never interacted with him before is more important). He shows her his secret abilities and grants her free power-ups for no reason besides him being an imbecile. And he has absolutely no sense of danger. He is not at all worried about being stuck in a world forever and just immediately gets over it.
Oh. My. God.I've only read up to chapter 7 (still reading) but I just had to run and leave a review. This book is amazing and extremely captivating from chapter one. I literally could not put it down, I didn't even notice when one chapter would end and another would start because I was so drawn in.We've only met the characters Daphne and Atticus for a bit but their personalities and the way they interact are already on full blast. Your writing style is so good and the storyline and use of foreshadowing...amazing. I cannot wait to see where this story takes me.Amazing work, Author!
Kazuki was an ordinary young man until a freak accident involving a piano falling from the sky abruptly ended his life. Instead of passing on to the afterlife, Kazuki finds himself reincarnated as a baby in a fantastical world filled with magic, dragons, and futuristic technology.From the moment he wakes up in his cushy crib, Kazuki's life takes on a hilarious and adventurous twist. Armed with an RPG-like game interface that grants him quests, skills, and stats, Kazuki must navigate his new world with all the charm and clumsiness of a newborn.
bad translation is real. Unless you want to use additional mind powet to understand each chapters.also, author in 200 chapters seems like rushing.
I'll rate it as i see it, for me the only problem is the updates, maybe it can be improved in the future as I write more
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You know you win my attention just to the mention of soldiers! I love stories that had military trama, and yours picked my interest, since the beginning!I like how did you develop the story, is kinda interesting, how did he end in his situation, and he didn't even know about it, and I won't's say more for the spoiler, hope to read more! I really enjoy it!Keep going my friend, being an author is a telling journey! good luck to us! lol