I like what you have written so far but even more is that you write for yourself, for the story and a personal conviction which turn into an original story. Gj keep it up. I am not giving you a full score because of some issues which started from personal opinion but i don't want to impose as you made yourself crystal clear about it in the description.
This book is interesting, the way the author tells MC world view is clear and somehow felt as if they are telling their own story, I would really love to see where this little hidden wonder would take my mind on it's journey of self discovery
Very well written and starting out you actually feel that he is blind. Keeps to the backstory of being blind without much problem. I wish there was more chapters to read already.
I like the concept of being reborn through reverse vore (coming out the vag!na) and following the mc's new childhood, but i gotta say i had to drop at around chapter 20. Mc was reborn and is around ten. He got atleast 30 years on his new friends. He is past being an ***** and i understand the allure of harems but man, they aint legal yet, why ya gotta describe em like that
Loving it so far. The story is very entertaining to me mostly just watching as the MC's daily life is balanced between being a "power in the shadows" and a "MOB" character at the same time.
I do hope that eventually some things are brought to the forefront, as I can't say I enjoy the "lack of observation" archtype of some side characters that is generally employed in these kinds of series.
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Soooo, I think i just droped 25€ worth of Crystals on the Book and am now up to date. This Book hits a Sweetspot i didnt think i have. Fantasy/Sci-Fi with a lot of short but rich explanation of the World an its Weapons, with an awesom cast of main charakters. While some might not like the near op Protagonist, i think its well explained why he xan survive what he goes through.What might annoy the most is the sentece structure: Example: As them it annoys them. Example end. It happens more often than you think.All in all: Its an AWESOME ride and you should enjoy it!**: I cant wait for the next chapter. please faster T_T
A nice story that gives me Hunger Games sort of vibes, but with otherworldly beings. What really made me enjoy what I've read so far is how the characters are designed. Distinct and unique personalities keep the momentum going, along with the already interesting plot in itself. A solid recommendation from me :)On a side note, the relationship between Silas and Saya is rather endearing, and I find it quite adorable~
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This book is. Hmm...Breathtaking. It is the action for me. the author is well versed at active storytelling. He successfully glue the reader to the stories. I'm more than impressed with the character development. keep up the good work. also I love the rate of update.
I’ve read enough to qualify for a review. So far, the protagonist seems stupid and oblivious to the world he literally has more experience in than any other being alive!Also, the characters seem like extras. Reading a story should make you believe that character is real, but it seems to me like they are only there to make the protagonist seem cooler/badass.Additionally, the plot is a bit . . . stupid. The protagonist makes dumb decisions and the plot seems suited in his favor. Fights happen just because, and the author keeps forgetting they’re in a school. The protagonist based high school off of an anime, which is subordinate recommended. It’s silly in my opinion.The writing is sluggish and dull, and it seems as if it’s being rushed through. Overall, the only time I’d recommend this is if you like dumb characters and world building, or dumb plots that revolve around the character.