I was really liking the story until the love interest lost her memories and then the MC gets NTR'ed since she does not remember him. This is not necessary for the rest of the story, there were already enough mysteries to unravel on top of the game content, but the author had to add in this terrible trope
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(Slightly spoilery review, but not really a spoiler)Good novel very enjoyable. The Mc is a transmigrator and more or less the typical cautious cowardly protagonist, but in my opinion its done in such a way where its not overly irritating and fits the novel. After all he is a background character so it makes sense and meshes well with his system's abilities.Besides the Mc the other characters have been given enough time to grow to a point where I at least have an inkling of each of them, although it would probably take a number of more chapters to make each of them more distinct. (talking about the side characters here) The development of the story can be considered slow, but I find it to be a good pace for a background character, naturally for protagonist speeds it does feel lacking but in the context of the novel its well paced.World Background is quite good so far, obviously its not all that fleshed out since the protagonist has stayed in the Sect for the entirety of the novel up to this point, but the Sect feels real at least which is more than I can say for most Xianxia. (although it still has a lot of the blatant Xianxia Sect stereotypes but rather than a flaw I'd say that's more played as a comedic aspect/the world purposefully being like a Xianxia novel.)To conclude this novel is a solid 4-5 stars, the only reason the score is as low as it is, is because of how infrequently its updated.I do recommend reading it though if you'd like a change from a traditional Xianxia, and are all right with the fact that the novel rarely update.
Thank for the beautiful story Author. I like the world and characters you created. And i hope you would until the very end. Stort is a bit slow-paced but i like the way you write except grammar. But i too am not a native English speaker so i am not affected. But you can take and editor. Therea are some readers who wants to do it and if you create discord you can communicate and take their help. And i want to ask do you think about increasing the daily updates. Even though not everyday once in a while could be very good for us readers. Again thanks for the story and i hope you continue the writinh until the end .
Pleasantly surprised. Went into this with no expectations but enjoyed volume one. Hope this continues and curious to see where the author takes Ed.
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I enjoy how the story is progressing it's interesting. Keep up the goodwork author. Keep writing chapters and don't drop and I will keep on supporting.
Liked it very much :) Your novel was the first one that made me to join as a member of this novel site. Very good story narration and well done
....Basically League of Legends....ok...but why...I know it's base on games and eSports..but why?! I just feel originality is much better than using real-life games. Like...**** it...just make one up.
Awesome, intriguing, hilarious, and FUCKING FUNNY!!! Can't contain my laughter, there should be more,
The release is so slow, why can't it be released twice everyday
Great story i like it.
I only managed to read the first few paragraphs before giving up. The idea shows promise the execution, though, does unfortunately not live up to that promise.
This story needs significant editing and spell-checking.
Maybe that gets better further into the story, but I find the sentence building and grammatical errors to be too off-putting to continue reading.