I like the idea of selling high-tech weapons on to another world, but MC's issues with his parents, romance, systems with attitude, and getting involved with random shit and cultivation just bothered me the most. This would be great without involving cultivation and romance. Just pure selling weapons, developing weapons from muskets, flint locks to missiles, just pure destruction, killing, plotting, and no family shit or romance would be very great instead. Have you seen the War Dogs or Lord of War movies by nicolas cage? or even anime like jormungand and black lagoon anime? those would be great references for this novel.
Not worthy of the rank of first on the site. There is nothing special at all going on here. MC finds an old machine and because of boredom gains OPness. I've read bad beginning to novels but this one takes the cake at the character's opening lines being boredom. If there were more chapters I might be able to rate this higher but there is nothing special to see here. Characters are plain and antagonists are your everyday classics. There were even filler chapters in the first 20, come on now, I expect better from a first ranked novel.
You just need a bit of work on grammar , but other than that it's really good. It gets more and more interesting ! Keep it up author. Btw I'm not done with it yet but I'm far enough into it to leave a review.
In over 20 chapters of this novel I only liked when the mc read the comments on his review of the technology. Translation wise it is fine. I just don't like the story or the characters. The mc and pretty much everyone he meets annoys me. For whatever reason this story also has to glorify the mc by using misunderstandings for people to think the mc is better than he is. I would much rather the story put a large focus on the reviews and the tech. Maybe this happens later but I don't wish to continue reading to find out.
Translator needs more support so we can get more chapters.So Guys and galsss i plead u to rate this novel cuz im liking it soo much already that i want 2 chapters a day...im sure my fellow readers will help me or u could read this story and judge yourself and review it.
total garbagethe mc itself is totally stupid childish and immaturelike who the **** just rape a girl out of no wherelike what if the hydro member even rape a child woman like totally garbage i know that the current earth itself is horrible but at least woman this day have rights like sighh the author who wrote this just totally is sadistic horny and a power hungry dominating man
It's a little of a sign in story but also a money hungry system... Besides that I couldn't even make it to the double digit chapters. The MC made it impossible to continue. The power went straight to his head immediately. His actions and mindset just put me off starting with showing up to a job he hasn't been to in a week and acting like everyone should bow down to him because of his power level that NO ONE KNOWS ABOUT YET!
petty main character who bows to and obeys his enemies. Strangely enough, mc tries to take advantage of the few people who seem friendly to him. especially the friendly ones who are in a desperate situation and have strong/rich background. the ones who could help his family's living situation in the real world. Instead he tries to scam these friendly rich people into buying water and jerky for tens of thousands of dollars. ALL OF THIS WHILE he discovered an OP cheat of a godstone that he keeps in his room that could enable him to make billions. someone tell me where i'm wrong please. also the conversation just feels extremely unnatural and choppy. definitely fed up with this ****ty story peace out boys
I liked the story in the beginning even considering the whole son-in-law plot but these following chapters just ruined everything, like how can he get back together with that Hailey, seriously the dude caught them in a hotel in a room and just like he has forgiven her, well this just made me give up on the story
Can’t wait for the next chapter!
Nice read ... The author is very creative
I'm really inlove with this book and your writing style, I love how your show off the characters