Sage wake up dude we need more and long chaptersStory was progressing completely fine why did you stopJust start writing dude ..........
The book is amazing, the author is amazing, and you'll love the book. If even an asshole like me likes it, then why not you?Nothing else, just jump in.
Just as I informed you at the other GINKEN, I want to remind everyone who is reading this book.A newer, higher-quality version of GINKEN is available. It can be found on Webnovel with the working title GINKEN: Ember in the Storm.Most people would consider the new edition to be a brand-new entry in the series. It follows a sequence of events and improves some of the awful quality. I would suggest giving anime a shot if you share my enthusiasm in it. (Note: The early arcs are really an embellishment; the story actually begins at Golden Wasakona.)I appreciate the people who stand with me.
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Best novel ever.I hope that you will continue your writting it would be bad to see someone with so much potential quit.Best novel ever.I hope that you will continue your writting it would be bad to see someone with so much potential quit
Untuk seorang yang kembali kemasalalu, Mc memiliki mentalitas yang buruk.Terutama pada bagian dimana Mc banyak omong kosong saat bertarung, bagi mereka yang memiliki banyak pengalaman hidup dan mati, sangat konyol melihat Mc yang melakukan tindakan idiot disaat pertempuran. Bahkan olah raga lari ringan membutuhkan metode pernafasan yang tepat untuk menjaga stamina, tapi Mc sedang dalam pertarungan hidup dan mati tapi malah mengatakan omong kosong ditengah pertempuran, hanya pemula yang akan memiliki banyak pemikiran disaat pertempuran sengit terjadi, dan juga sangat idiot untuk berteriak kepada monster yang belum tentu mengerti bahasa manusia, bahkan jika Mc ingin melakukan provokasi terhadap musuh, pasti ada banyak cara yang lebih efektif terhadap monster.Selain pada bagian aksi yang buruk, bagian lain dalam novel ini cukup klise karena sebagian besar alur cerita didalam novel ini telah digunakan pada beberapa novel lainnya.Dan saya cukup mengerti karena ini novel pertamamu, tapi saya pikir lebih baik untuk memiliki bab yang lebih pendek tapi tidak memiliki banyak kekurangan. Karena semakin banyak kata berarti lebih banyak kemungkinan kesalahan yang akan muncul didalamnya, tapi semakin sederhana sesuatu maka semakin sedikit kemungkinan kesalahan didalamnya. Lagipula ini adalah karya pertamamu, lebih baik mempuat novel dengan lebih sedikit kata tapi tanpa banyak kekurangan didalamnya, daripada novel dengan banyak kata tapi justru menjadi novel yang penuh omong kosong didalamnya.
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its good at first but the author dragging its readers intelligence by a force death scenario of MC parents by unreasonable plot.. you can handle it smoother if you want to accelerate MC development.. waste of time..
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This is the first novel i have ever read in which MC is stronger than the system...____________________________________________________________________________
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I honestly love the book it well written and the effort made by the author Is noticeablePlot development -excellentWorld building-excellentCharacter development-good