Have read up to chapter 82. I'm giving up on this one. The grammar is bad. The author leaves out random words that change the meaning of the sentence. Constantly uses adjectives in place of nouns. Just plain uses the wrong words...but even leaving that aside, there is NO CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT for the MC. Every other character develops as a person, but the MC is completely static. He gets more powerful, and the author EXPLAINS how mature and wise he is. However, he hasn't changed or developed at all since the beginning of the story. I'm done with it.
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I had to edit this in my mind, such a pain. A good novel without the horrible translation, BUT HOW IS THIS COIN WORTHY?!?! CAN'T EVEN READ IT WITHOUT USING EXTRA BRAIN POWER. Bruh I just wanna read not be an editor.
Sounds really interesting from the description and I hope same goes for the novel ??☺☺?????????☺????????????☺?????????☺?????☺?????????????
The story seems really good! I haven't caught up yet but so far it's really interesting. I'm glad the translation is good, and the story development is amazing as well!
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Literally a shameless 5 star review from the author.This is my first time writing a web novel, but I've got a wide vision for what is to come in the series. I've taken a lot of inspiration from steampunk literature like the Leviathan Trilogy by Scott Westerfeld and light novel series such as the Saga of Tanya the Evil. This is of course, based in the events of WW1 and will have a lot of parallel events. However, there's going to probably be a lot of deviation from the actual events and the limited POVs will be interesting to develop.All in all, thanks for coming here and feel free to suggest anything that might make the web novel better. I hope you guys will enjoy the story!
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This story is so amazing, I never expect to read such an amazing work. If you are fan of isekai this is a recommendation, Keep up the good work author!!!!
This is a great book, not as well known as many. The plot development, and characters are wonderful, although the translation is a slight bit off of being perfect, it is still a fantastic read.