The author doesn't understand anything about astrophysics or physics in general, he talks about galaxies like the are toys (a galaxy holds 100 billion stars on average), people talk in space where their is no air, and he thinks just because a spaceship can travel 10 times the speed of light, he can travel between galaxies in a matter of days ... WTF man.
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One of the best Chinese web novels recent years. Its not a quite traditional cultivation story. It should be really really hard to translate as its actually a wuxia story in a magic world.**: about the synopsisremember the mc's name and forget the rest
It's great but could use work on the main character. Loved all of the novel except the main character. He's meant to be some genius mage who is immortal... but he talks like a plain teenager and he doesn't seem very intelligent? He's meant to have the title of Sage but he's not inquisitive? The closest to wanting to learn new things he gets is just being interested in cultivation. Which, that part of him being interested in cultivation seems quite forced. It should be more smooth and gradually interested in cultivation. Instead, he's foregoing all magic immediately to learn about something he read in a book once pretty much.
Not much to say here it is a great novel with good prospects in future development and a good theme. I would write more about why this novel is good and whatnot but that is too long. JUST READ IT! Even if it is just the 39 free chapters, it will allow you to understand the story and see where it is developing and hopefully you will like it.Hope it gets selected.
This story is amazing, the characters feel genuine at least the main and secondary ones the rest don't really matter lol. The different Qi's reminds me of reverend Insanity which is cool however what I didn't like was the author making the the MC's assistant start with fire qi which is constantly used by every mc out there and it's just annoying seeing as he had 6 elements to chose from and he chose fire but it's fine just a minor thing. As for world building it's very good but I just hooe the author doesn't introduce stuff too quick and then gets overwhelmed by everything and then forgets about something. Story is developing nicely I just really wish to see more of the family. Also going back to the Qi's I really wish that the author introduces more characters with uncommon qi types like poison,sound,wood,water etc However these are just my preferences and the author can do what he wants. As for the updates they are very frequent just that the chapters are short or atleast they feel short. but the quality isn't really dropping so just keep doing what your doing author and you'll be fine
Overall, a very good story. Sometimes there are grammar or spelling mistakes, but those are easy to look over. Pacing is just a touch too fast, and sometimes the story jumps around a bit making it a touch confusing but not too bad. I have very much enjoyed this story so far and I am looking forward to this as it further develops. Only character I don't really like, is the yandere, they have no place in a harem. At least in my opinion.
the novel is f***king great . I love the well structured way in which the author writes the novel, this should have been a five star but of course there's always room for improvement
One of my favorite Villain novel.You can pretty much understand the villain stand and there is some plot that readers might don't like but fret not it still better than others villain typical plot hole.I remember reading this on MTL but now with human translator.I have no problem reading with the translation, Its pretty much clear to me.
This is a the best Chinese novel with urban setting that I have ever read after cultivation chat group, even though it has a harem tag but until the last chapter I read (ch470) there was not a single woman who expresses her feelings to MC. One of the reasons why I drop a lot of Chinese novels is because a lot of main characters are arrogant. come on I understand they are strong but please don't act like thugs with super powers (my wife is beautiful CEO) loot of them also racist (really super star)I want more story like this novel because MC is rational not shameless, hot-blooded, or pervertif anyone have recommended urban story with decent MC like this let me know because lots of them are underrated in this site
OK the story started with great quality but chapter by chapter the quality decrease from 44 upward its just plain and awful to read novels needs to stop the going to school cliche is killing most of them I don't even understand y he should go to school coz all the skills and beads are in the dimensions no offense I find the whole school premises dull. The author had a good Idea maybe it will b better but I doubt it I mean who in their right mind will remain in the same grade for 3years straight. That plot armor is all over the place infact I don't even understand what's going on. Verdict read this if u only have nothing better to do and the author is a huge nationalists.
the protagonist's choices are irritating, always using the limit of the capital value he has, the skills he acquires are very broken and his mobile app always has news that benefit him.