Despite the hope I had at the start, the story is poorly written. Moreover, it is full of problems : baseless arguments used to justify things in the plot. If the author had at least not talked about his arguments in every part of chapters, it would have been better. The idea behind the plot is great, but it is poorly used. On top of that, the English is bad.
After some hours, as I finally finish learning about skill and what can of skill I want to use.
Это лучшее что читал спасибо.............................................................................................................................. .. ...
Only 12 chapters and gotta say enjoying what this author is doing. At first l thought the family the MC was living were too kind and a bit weird how they just let him be part of the family willing to pay for all of his expenses but later it was explained they were orphans which gave the reason to their kindness but also later soo wan if l recall how to spell that name correctly was actually not ignorant but observing the MC. I thought that was a great play done by the author. Anyways good job author cause you did GOOD!!
This novel is heavily uunderrated! And it was also just what I was looking for
This is a wonderful story...You will be easily hook to this book because of its mc...And most likely those women charactecters...The story is great...The characters are great...The mc is great...The fights is great...Overall a wonderful story...
EXP to You All.I hope you liked it, this is a remake version of my old novel. It isn't popular and full of mistake but I have improved so it is much better than the old one.Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeexxxxxxxxxxxxxppppppp
A very interesting story with a hard-hitting premise about the struggle of poor people and the difficulties they face in an unjust world.I really like Antonio and Jose as characters and really feel for all they've been through. The gambling scenes were really exciting and stressful at the same time. Poor Jose could not catch a break.Yanli is absolutely detestable, I hated every moment he showed up. Overall I think this is a very interesting novel with the potential to get even better.My only remark would be to pay attention to verb tenses. Great otherwise!
Wooow it's truly awesome. Getting know the unknown stories about our worshipping one's . Very excited to extend reading. The river gang we are going to deep to get know about the goddess. Feeling fantastic
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The book would have been interesting, if the MC used the basic magics ingeniously in combinations, but this is just check-in to get super powerful spells automatically.