This was amazing !!!Im really excited for the next chapter ?
This story has a great start. Very interesting characters with a clear plot and nice interactions between everyone. Looks like it will be of a similar pace and style to Farming for Gold which is one of my favorite books on webnovel. Very different plot and such but the feel is the same which is fantastic. I can't wait to read more. The author's english isn't perfect but it is very good. I have had to drop a few novels because I couldn't figure out what was going on. This was a breeze. A few errors every chapter but nothing really worth mentioning. Not only that but the author is visibily improving each chapter. Highly Recommend.
The book does a great job in its grammar, and the story sort of starts off with a bang right then and there, but also still describing the characters.
Writing Quality: The grammar is little confusing and the author made pretty much a lot of mistake while writingStability of updates: Don't know if the author is still writing this story he probably quit after 23 chapterStory development: it's fine not too bad but what I'm not satisfy in this story is the character habit in scratching their head's seriously? If the author decide to continue this story I suggest him don't make them scratch their head's too oftenCharacter design: not bad the only problem is the enemies their facing are a little limited in names for example a rat named Mouse mickey are you serious? XD and I saw change a girl name from Violet to Chrissy whats wrong with violet?World development: Pretty good using a VR technology to cultivate their strength for survival from the haze.
I hope that someday I will see your novel on live broadcast or anime at least because it is very great out of all the configurations Oh my God really you are a genius
The novel is quite good nkt perfect but definitely a nice read at the moment im posting this i still got 2 more chapters to go im stacking up untill he finds some civilization also please dont speed that up i hope he fixes his spaceship and actually learns the inner work of it i would preferably like that the woods sre super large more then 1 mil km in diameter if not more so that the mc is forced to fix his spaceship because leaving his space ship eould be very stupid and even if ut can go invisible we already know that there is definitely magic in that world and i hope the mc won't be the kind to deny something that is happening in front of his face.Anyways back to the review the characters that were introduced are good we dont really know much about them just small details also mc past is a mystery. For now the only villain doesn't seem stupid i hope it stays this way because i cant believe that some famous space pirate is stupid. We don't know much about the new world mc is in all we know is the planet is flat also definitely suspicious that there is magic or cultivation. Hope you do romance but if you not that good at writing it and you going to give me some **** cliche romance then please don't write it untill later in the story though i hope you would build up his relationship with a girl at the beginning just ad friends would recommend to read some romance novels that actually don't have **** cliche romance.Ignore my bad grammar and misspellings.
I'm a huge fan of stories about cultivation and leveling up. I think this book has the potential of becoming my next favorite cultivation story if you take out some of the repititive words used. I'd love the action to happen soon tho ?...
Nice plot. Would recommend it to anyone who likes reading, looking forward to the next chapter. You did a good job, author. Keep it up.
The stability of updates is great. Writing quality is okay, needs some work on grammar though.Unfortunately its to cringy to read. The MC acts like a 5 year-old, to the point of my thinking he actually was a young child during the first chapter until i realized he was 15... There are a lot of plot holes too, this can be seen even in the first few chapters... for instance the MC's parents for absolutely no reason decide it is a great idea to force a child to become the ruler of literally the entire universe at 8 years old. Despite being a ruler the MC never attended any banquets, to the point of him mistaking a restaurant for one...Wanted to like it but the entire thing just comes off as way to forced.
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Raw title: 老祖宗在天有灵Status: 666 chapters (ongoing).....................................................................................................................................
I was a bit cringe at the beginning seeing that It's the same introduction to the other Isekai Manga/Novel I read, specially with OP Ability that was received from a God/Goddess/Entity, but the plot changed my view of the story, sure he is a bit arrogant and clumsy like the other Isekai Mc I know but how he adapts and how he follows what he aspires to be is what made him different from the rest. keep up the good work and keep writing dude, this is a really great book.