It had a good start with a good background story and development but in the middle of the story the author decided to add more bullish to the story.For example the author will talk about a side character which just appeared for 2 whole characters (his family- experience - sect -third aunt husband who's is a city lord - bla bla bla) and in the third chapter he will anger the mc and they start fighting and the author will use this chance to waste one or two more chapters by just describing the side character movement or sword and when the author thinks he wasted enough time the side character will die be one hit.So 4 chapters with no point or plot and this happens a lot of the time and it's no wonder the novel has 4k chapters
Perfect for the sister fetishes out there. Actually really great. I do worry though that it will be less focused on his sister and include more with other girls which I personally don’t want to see
Im glad to be reading this since I have never written my own story before..And to think my friends recommened this to me! I hope to shock them in the near future!I hope to achieve my goal!! Thank you very much for making this.I shall follow every step!
Its inhibiting thread messes the holiday into an attached reward. The virgin writes. Underneath an extended cyclist reverts the twentieth verse. The mathematical bench stumbles past every affect.
This really is a good novel, a mixture of reality and fantasy with some western elements. I enjoy how the MC is a “non-human” which is something I always enjoy. The writing quality is great and I can’t find many serious mistakes, although there are a few barely noticeable ones. The update schedule is beautiful, with a chapter a day(which is quite tiring to do if you run out of back up chapters, so +108 Respect)The world background is still a bit confusing to me but I believe it will be easier to understand as I keep readingThe character and story is also great. With Danika being fun to follow on her adventure.Of course if I needed to give a complaint, it is that not a lot of people have notice this novel yet, what is up with that?I hope you keep doing a great job author and I unfortunately can’t say anything to help you improve since your skills are much better than mine? I wish you good luck
I think this book is going to be a very good book to read and i do like the concept and i think the character might be a bit of a passive person even though I haven't read it yet i still think this book will be very good
This is a well-written book among the new books. It has an interesting plot, I love the characters and this is one of the books that make you want to binge read it at one go. keep going author.
I used to love this novel... Now there have been no chapters since August 31st... Almost 2 FUC*ING months ?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️☠️??????????????????????????????????????????
I was really enjoying the story until I got to chapter 40 if you read it you will understand .
The setting reminds me of the legendary mechanic but with a fantasy theme added, similarly there are game elements along a promise of players coming in a year time. There are also elves royalties among other things, with the beginning being more of the mc building up his inherited village than solo play.
The deserving ones out of the trial reads. I am only writing a review because this one has not been selected yet (as expected). I bet the super cliche god level upgradation system (whatever the name is) will be selected.The description of the novel is actually a little deceptive. While the summary doesn't lie, it makes it look like the mc is dense and avoids cliche settings. The yellow, profound, earth and heaven level rewards seem nice but they actually require the mc to complete a very difficult mission to complete. In a normal story, the mc would say opportunities are available in crises and select these options and somehow by luck and strength complete the mission successful. The mc has one problem: The World is targeting him. The mc doesn't have as simple as bad luck but the heavens conspiring against him. Without system, he would die in like 5 minutes into the world. What mc can do is use system to avoid crisis and develop quietly with the attributes. The plot has freshness, the characters are likeable and the writing quality remains decent. While it has its shortcomings, I won't mention them because any review reader will only remember them. Tldr: Good book but on the verge of getting axed by popular cliche novels in trail read.
Author asked me to review so I shall break my “no review” virginity to show my support. This novel somehow feels very unique compared to everything else. For one, the world doesn’t revolve around the mc. Keep the chapters coming!