Story itself has a good promise, it's a new setting overall. The character design and the world exploration needs further development. Still some grammatical errors and some sentences are quite awkward. But I'm quite enjoying the story telling, so overall a good read for me.
Wow, a fascinating story that captures your heart. I got hooked when I read the synopsis and it just got better and better experience with each chapter. Absolutely perfection of writing uses of phrases, backdrop simple yet intriguing. You have die really great work. Kudos to the author. Power to you. ??☺☺ I nightly recommend this book to read by everyone.
I know this story will go downhill but still is readable. Too ostentatious. read it only if you have nothing else to read. old-timers who can not find anything good to read can definitely read it once at super speed as it does not have much fanfare. Only 25 chapters in, this is just at the boundary of being trashed.
Author is unreliable constantly straying away from and abandoning the interesting characters, themes and plot points. The biggest mistake is not focusing on fishing and instead spending multiple chapters chasing meaningless boring cliches. Lastly, the MC shows only his awful side once he gets even a sliver of power. I enjoyed some of the beginning fishing chapters but now I have no desire to read any further.
Wait... to read this entire story I will have to spend approximately $2,000? This has to be a joke. I know this story is extremely long, but the quality is so poor. I always accepted that Webnovel is EXTREMLY overpriced, but with shorter novels it feels more manageable I guess. I had to take a break just because the high cost left such a bad taste with such poor quality storie. I decided to give Webnovel a chance again, and I come back to....this. gross
I wanted the main character to fall in love with only one person. .........................................................................
Don’t know why there is a villain tag but so far the story is great!The dialogue between characters feel realistic and smooth while each character still retains their original personality.The potential is absolutely huge, keep it up!
It's an acceptable story from a quality point of view.It's a very funny story. You can see how this will make the fights more tense when the odds are against the heroes and death in a substantial but not fatal match.Now concentrate on the best elements. Characters. Many characters!
I read good portion into the book by my suspension of disbelief can only carry me so far. It is fascinating how everyone in the book asks the dumbest questions for exposition. All main characters seem to be naieve and lack any sceptisim when it comes to the "game world" or how the Alex got OP abilities. Characters feel so lifeless especially Alex. I can't speak for the whole book because I had to stop reading.
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06 20 24 ep 9
I love this book it's written really well, keep up the good work dear