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Very good plot line, comparable to Supernatural and Grimm, but with Isekai (transfer to other world with memories) twist.It is still building up the story line, which is very interesting so far, hopefully it stays amusing.
looking forward to this one .............................................................................................
Unlike most Xianxia novel this one has a slow and steady pace, that is very good, building a good establishment to the story, is very important, it would be better if the author is more accurate and detailed in explaining about his coming forth characters, and also explains the MC's surrounding more better, but the story is the best among the ones I've read. Do not drop this author...
The story of this novel is quite interesting for me, although the writing still needs to be improved, but it doesn't matter to me. this novel is good
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La terminé de leer en mtl, conoces alguna novela parecida en mtl para leerla, porque me encantó esta ♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????♥️?????
This dragon was just passing by..This dragon liked this novel.. This dragon is pleased.. This dragon gave you 5 stars don't disappoint him..You puny mortals should read it too..#HiddenDragonSectMaster
Spell awesome? it's D-A-O 's book. The characters the world building is amazing that will surely satify your reader's imagination. I'm not that fan game like books but I'm really glad I read this book. It never disappoints me.
you should read this for the hahaha, not for being serious. Grammer is... well... OK it's not the best but this story is funny. it's a goofy story, with a good plot.
Bob is a bop. Am tired, but Tired Fern says that this is a bop. Read it, you loser. Why are you wasting your time reading those stupid harems when you can have BOB. BOB AND A FUCKIN CHICKEN. CMON MAN.
This review is after reading chapter 151 and as I’m writing this I am nowhere close to being caught up. So some of the things I’m talking about could have changed by now. Alright so the novel overall is pretty good but it has some distinct problems that tend to annoy readers, including me.The story overall has an interesting premise. The characters are interesting and I don’t really dislike any of them(except for the ones your supposed to dislike of course.) The story does tend to fall into some cliches and some situations that don’t make sense at times. Though it’s not really possible to make a completely unique story and for the most part the hiccups aren’t that bad.Now the story itself doesn’t have to many problems, but the ones that it does have show up often enough to be a problem.1) The author’s first language isn’t English and it’s pretty easy to tell. I personally don’t really care to much but I know it’s a turn off for a lot of people so just pointing it out.2) In the story the Mc is called a genius by multiple characters as well as the author. This isn’t true at all as he’s shown to be average or slightly above average during the story. (and don’t even get me started on his eq.) The characters calling him a genius is fine as those that do are normally biased and it makes sense coming from them. I would also like to say that this isn’t necessarily a bad thing. The mc doesn’t have to be a genius for a good story. There are plenty of good stories with mcs that are just smart, average, and even ones where the mc is a little slow. I personally think it’s more accurate to call him talented as he’s been confirmed confirmed to learn things fast. 3) This is related to my last point kinda but the author tends to make the Mc not realize certain things that are pretty obvious for the sake of the story. For one it kinda breaks immersion and 2 it further makes calling him a genius seem wrong. As I said before, there’s nothing wrong with your Mc not being a genius, but if based on previous experiences they would be able to figure something out either let them figure it out or change it a bit to where it makes sense that they wouldn’t. The worst part about this one is that within like a minute I can normally think of a small change in the situation or dialogue to make it make sense why he wouldn’t know. It makes it feel like the author isn’t putting that much effort in the story when he doesn’t really come off that way.So overall it’s a really good story premise and I feel like if those problems were fixed the story would be so much better and would probably be a story I’m extremely eager to read instead of just enjoying.
It is my firm belief that this sucks. There's recently been this trend of I have thousand/hundred times talent/rewards/enhancements etc. and I just hope that it stops.That's all.
