Nice story, been looking this kind of novel for long, finally found it. An immortal story in modern age. Waiting for the next chapter.keep it up man...
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A very good LN for people who like MMO LN.Very good points (general): - Story and story development- Characters - In game Character design- Reality story is interessting, well balanced and not "too much"- The author really tries to have originality in some aspectGood point (for me) :- More PVE oriented than PVP- MC is overpowered but he is not the only one- Secondary characters have a real utility Bad points :- not foundNeed improvements points (for me) : - Writing sometimes repeats the same thing a little too much - but the author could easily remove that by putting a little more description of the item, character level, region background etc. - We can see that the author wants a balanced story (A overpowered MC who has shortcomings and who needs to progress) and it works but one or two "epic situation" are welcomed (currently Chapter 293)- [SPOILER WARNING] A little too much luck for the MC friends and family . Hidden races and job are said to be very rare... in fact, the author had a great idea for his best friend (giving hidden job because of the MC jobs) but who know why he hasn't exploited it more.
Dem! To think that you're hiding such good stuffs here. To our dearest author, thank you for making this delicious delicacy. To me, this novel has perfect scene transition/story development, interesting character design, and amazing world background. Truly, it's a good catch. Sadly, it's a new book... I was left hanging, looking for more chapters. Please update more and very very fast Author sis.
Hey dear!! I'm not here to give review, as I haven't started reading it. I will read it when atleast 50 chapters are written and uploaded. Honestly I was really disappointed after you dropped top star . And there are many readers who are also disappointed and it's obvious why they are disappointed. You know, you can always resume that novel. It's not a big deal. As an author, you should take responsibility if it's in your capability....and only if it's in your capability. And its not a big deal even if you don't resume it. Focus on your new story and don't disappoint the new readers.....and yourself. I know it must be bad to see so many negative comments. Don't get discouraged. ?You're Indian author, right? Why don't you right about bollywood? I would really love to read about bollywood superstar and his/her journey. You will get so many good ideas as you know about it more that Chinese entertainment industry. There are so many scandals we are reading about bollywood right now, it's totally worth to become a story. I hope you one day write about it. Good luck with your new story ?
This has been a blast so far nearing the end of volume 1 to any avid reader that would like to delve in a cricket fanfic this would be an ideal choise but do keep in mind this fanfic is heavily laced with Indian perspective making it a bit awkward for others. This story is ver inviting and good plot development though I must admit it seemed to falter a lot, like streching up in academy years, a sudden blitzering through unimportant parts, a bit of experiments here and there and complete to partial inconsideration on the world around mc. But I must admit ?, it has been a ? joy ride for me. The story is overall focused, questions left unanswered to add to mystery, strong main charector development, not undergoing any roadblocks, mc incredibly dedicated to his purpose not ? getting distracted while the plot moves alongside him in a symphony.To anyone and everyone ? out there give it a proper try and by 50ish chapters you will fall ? in love with it (given you do understand cricket terminology and many things are just cited as a fact with no explanation).
This is the first time I have ever did a review for novel. In my opinion this novel is really refreshing. It doesn’t have those side characters where you bump into them and they automatically want to kill you and your whole family. There is really isn’t any plot armor where the main character finds some stupidly overpowered item at the start of the game. Unlike most other main characters that get transported from another world he actually uses his knowledge from his old world. He is not afraid of others and doesn’t hide his powers like every other main character from almost any novel. Too top it all off, he is never afraid of a challenge.Now there are a few cliche moments made by the side characters but, it’s never a constantly reacuring thing in the novel. The author keeps improving the unrealistic moments in the novel and does so at a very rapid pace.Plus the author is willing to listen to the readers and improve on his work so the story only gets better as time goes by.I recommend reading the novel up too chapter 30 before deciding whether to drop it or not. I am pretty sure that once you read it too there you will be hooked.I have also noticed a lot of the other reviews about this novel and have got to say that you can tell they have not read a whole lot of the novel. So take it from someone that has read the novel up to the latest chapter and, has read way too many other novels, make sure that the people you listen too has at the very least read half of it. After all that’s what the reviews are for. So that the people that have read most of it can give their opinions on the novel so that new people can develope a basic idea on what the novel is going to be like.
loving this book please hurry so i can know how it ends
Best book so far!
new chapter please
Already so in love with this book!! This is fast becoming my fav in the six pack series <3
amazing story