Some chapter are in english and other in other language i don’t know can you make only English
kind of detail heavy but it's pretty good so far! Could probably work on your pacing a little.
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Great story but I can’t get busy and not stay on the same consistent update schedule. I’ll try my best to fix that. Feel free to get any CONSTRUCTIVE criticism where you see fit. You can get mii your stones if you want but this is still purely for fun entertainment purposes.
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I absolutely love this story! This is the first time that I am giving five stars on everything. This story credible character design, world, and the writing quality is amazing.
The feels of this novel kinda like a Japanese movie--I forgot the title,sheesh--it will give you the thrills if you want one! All I can say is, this is a rare gem from the wanderlust imagination of the author! Good job!
The idea is nice but the grammar is so bad i dont know what is happening. I suggest using grammarly. Im four chapters in and no sign of chatroom or whatever and utterly confused
Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected. Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.
It's a fantastic story, and you will either love it or hate it. If you are someone who can't separate yourself from the mc, you'll hate it. If you can pull yourself out of that and enjoy the fact that the mc inflicts all his troubles on himself you will love it. The sad part is this was dropped where it was. Nut that's the problem with nearly all web novels
Novel with a good start. Main character grow in is mentality. I can't wait to read more.Only one thing, I hope the MC will not improve is cultivation too fast and too easily.