I'm glad I met you, together forever, even if it's not in my plans

Awesome Story More plz.this is a really good story kind of fun to see how you're putting the story together it's kind of like how you're doing with it interesting and be kind of fun to see all the technology going to bring in

This novel seems pretty solid and enjoyable to  me. It is a shame that the author has dropped or abandoned this a couple years ago. I found it interesting and wanted to read much more. I know that authors almost never return to stories they have set aside for this long so my only regret is that I will never know how the story turns out.

Can you check out my novel, Blood Ties(Ketsuen)? Also, I got the chills so many times toward the end of this book. It completely blew my mind. It managed to surpass my high expectations AND be nothing at all like I expected.  Let me preface this with an apology. If I sound stunningly inarticulate at times in this review, I can't help it. My mind is completely fried. This novel was relentless. Take-no-prisoners. Driven. Fast/-paced. (non-stop, etc.)...race to the end. Rip-roaring.

Ahoy, ye scallywags and sea dogs, gather 'round and lend yer ears to a tale of uncharted waters and hidden treasures! I be talkin' 'bout somethin' that'll have ye swashbucklin' through the perilous seas.This be a story that'll set yer heart aflutter like the Jolly Roger in a stiff breeze. It's chock-full o' salty sea battles, where the boom of cannons fill the air, and the decks run red with the blood.Ye'll meet characters as cunning as Blackbeard and as brave as Bartholomew Roberts, keepin' ye guessin' till the very last page.But what sets this tale apart be the sprinkle of the mystical and the magical. Aye, it's as if the Flying Dutchman himself has woven tales of old into the fabric of the story.If ye be hungerin' for a story that captures the essence of piracy – the thrill of the chase, the clash of steel, and the lure of hidden riches – then this be the booty ye seek. I'd lay down me finest five doubloons for this tale, for 'tis a voyage that'll leave ye thirstin' for more.

The next day, I went to the park and try my hand at zombies. The zombies were really nasty buggers, but with my masterful luring and unleashing my spinning compressed mana sphere, I leveled up pretty nicely. I hit the one hour mark and I am now level 3.