I went to look at the raw, it's just fucking cliche after cliche after cliche, it doesn't get any better. this is a story made by person who saw all the popular shite that was trending and copied all the plot lines from them. 0 f u cking originality, heck "the plagiarist" should give his author name to this guy, at least that guy tries to make a decent story. also if you poor f u c kers think i am exaggerating go read the upcoming chapters whether raw or if they decided to release it. i can't believe i wasted my time reading so many chapters.
If you can figure out what the author is talking about it seems good. The issue is you have to Reread everything because you can figure out who is talking or what they are talking about. Horrible grammar..... MTL would be better in all honesty
Am I in a dream or have I transmigrated to the world of cringe? I cannot fathom the sheer determination one must possess to write or TL this novel. For the love of god, I hope this was an intentioned parody or a satire.For those who wish to read the propagan- *oops* I mean novel-Cleanse your eyes and close your mind, for this novel has the singular power to revert your iq to that of a 10-year-old fanboy.RIP brain cells.RIP sanity.RIP eyes.RIP IQ.
Do you know what? I know you know what, this is B U L L S H I T right? Its a trash, a trash that makes money for QI WN, it's really a huge BULL S HIT
Hey, newbie here. This is the first novel i've actually followed through in this website. The writing is great, I would give 5 start if it's only a bit more detailed like I've seen some parts of the story where I've thought that Chen's club is actually in the middle of literal nowhere, and I just realized that there are some structures around it after I've read the following chapters.As for the story development, I have no issue with it for the most part. You sure know how to keep the readers from going away just by the way you set up your plot.For updating stability... I can't really blame you.When it comes to world background; you've actually managed to keep everything intact after all the complexities of the story. everything goes so we'll that I've never even questioned most of the world building related stuff that you write.that's it from me, I hope you'll continue to write this til' the final chapter. I really enjoyed this a lot, thank you for making this. <4
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the book is really good, my only problem is that there's no rest for the dude from one annoying situation to the other.
First and foremost I'm a super mystery genre fan, so of course my opinion will be biased ? This book is highly addictive and the main characters are superb. There are very few good detective novels out there, that's why, all the more reason to rave about this book. I simply enjoy the whole premise and what the characters bring to the table. The story arcs are the main highlights. And of course I'm shipping the main characters, but thats obvious ?
I rewrote this novel due to an unspeakable reason. While I'm sorry to the irresponsible action in the past month, but I could only do this. But well, I'm coming back baby, I didn't care if any of you still remember this novel or even still care about it, but here I am.
Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.
the story is not that bad, but the translation is
Not a fan of writing reviews, but since I feel that this novel doesn't have the exposure and support it deserves and the author is sooo nice I decided to share my short humble opinion.First of all the world building is very well made, it has similarities with the ultimate evolution. Nevertheless it's original, has a lot of potential and it's slowly but steadily presented.There's a long introduction delving a lot into the mc's personality and worldview. For some people maybe that's a reason not to read it. For me it wasn't boring at all. I could even empathise with him occasionally. The explanations and building of his personality maybe were were a bit rough and forced in some cases, but it didn't make it unpleasant and the author said he would improve his first chapters so maybe this will not me the case in some weeks.I am not a native speaker, I found some small and not important mistakes, but not many and they didn't make my reading experience bad.All in all I would definitely recommend it! Let's just hope that the author keeps this high release rate and quality :)